Open Poetry #19 |
Mistake Her or Me? |
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Mistake, Her or Me? I don't think I will ever believe That your mistake was her Rather comming home to me Don't you know how well I know you? I saw your happiness when it was you two And the mood swings when at times it was through Your the type of person that wouldn't do well alone Don't use that to come back home For that would be true injustice I've always thought you had more substance I'm not mad at this hudge mess But will never survive being second best My Love, my qualities are worth much more If true love for her,you should run to her door By Connie McDonald Copyright@2001 June 12, 2000 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Connie, this is so very sad, I hope this isn't related to a current ewxperience you're facing and you have found true love that is devoted to you as you are to him! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is a wonderfully emotional poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
This is a very hard place you write about. What catches my breath is the self worth that is so apparent here. To be in the midst of a heart shattering experience and still not lose the importance of self is quite a task that many fail. The essence of this concept is what I enjoy of this piece the most. Kudos!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Heart wrenching, truthful, so full of believable emotion. I really felt the emotions flowing through this. Well done, Z. |
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butterflykiss989 Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 52 |
That has to be hard... letting someone go who you love because you know they love someone else... and I agree you express the emotion that comes from that situatioin so well.. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Don't ever be second best. He has to love you as much as you love him, and if he loved you he wouldn't be with anyone else. Nicely written. |
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