Open Poetry #19 |
![]() ![]() |
Perception |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Perception Worry about tomorrow, while trapped in yesterday… How can I get over missing you, When you wont go away. My tears they’ve become futile, shed for me not you… Reality but perception, a change long over do. Not so much the fact it ended, what hurt worse was the way… Stumbling cross-eyed and blinded, time to live back in today. Live like it's your last day... |
||
© Copyright 2002 Ray Conley - All Rights Reserved | |||
Elizabeth![]() ![]()
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is a wonderful perspective to have on life. We all need to get over things and 'live back in today' at one time or another. Well done! ![]() God bless America, my home sweet home. |
||
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Today is all we have...... hard to learn to live that way... |
||
Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRAVO!!! Yes, we must all live up each day with a smile and with hope and cherish each moent, for if we alwauys worry about the future, we may regret so much we could have enjoyed now! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful wisdom, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ray, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
BB darling heart ahhhhh yes to return to today and start living for now, that is so hard. You’ve written this very very well. Take care of yourself and live for the now of you ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What I hated most about crying over my mistakes was the way my eyes burned and itched for days afterwards... and the feeling that I couldn't have changed the outcome, no matter what... life goes on...you'll find out you're better for this, now, in all the tomorrows that come... |
||
amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
A heart felt poem...I like it! |
||
bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Thank you all for your thoughts and taking the time to reply.Enjoyed your creative use of the smilies too... Peace Y'all... ![]() Live like it's your last day... |
||
Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I understand this. Possibly from a different perspective, but I do understand it. A good write. Songs of peace to you, too. |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |