Open Poetry #19 |
Spring Morning |
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Snow piled on rooftops, The buildings seemed pallid, as though wearing bathrobes, and sunbeams alighted the icicle diamonds that stretched out like carrots and hung off the drain pipes where radiant droplets were drumming and beating like flip-flops on marble. Spring sprinkled and sparkled,-- so graceful and dashing,-- that tree trunks of charcoal applauded with passion… [This message has been edited by Master (02-23-2002 02:50 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beautiful! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Master- You never cease to impress me with your use of imagery. I really enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Beautiful and good use of imagery.I love spring mornings and can imagine this one well. Peaches |
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