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Open Poetry #19

(Poem) the phone call

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-02-22 09:57 AM

the phone call
dedicated to lisa

so controlling… desire;
cuts away a path to pursue.
enchanting candor,
kisses my spirit kindly.
unprovoked passion,
emerges into my conscious thoughts.

soft voice heard;
transparent but centered on.
through phone line sylphlike,
links created as if… m’.

slender flavor of;
gyrates my mind to attempt answers
the unknown… related,
as I curl to listen, absorbed in, you.

t’was only a phone call,
innocently querying
silently igniting…
what only the breath of time will speak.

©2002 hayden a. james

Suggestions/comments?

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

[This message has been edited by haydenjames (02-22-2002 09:58 AM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-02-22 10:51 AM

hayden - the only suggestion I have is to just keep writing them like this. It's excellent and enjoyed reading it...

BC

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-02-23 11:51 PM

hayden-
I enjoyed this very much.
Well done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-02-24 12:04 PM

"t’was only a phone call,
innocently querying
silently igniting…
what only the breath of time will speak."
Keep up that phone connection. I enjoyed eavesdropping.