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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Into the darkness round, I peer... illusion of "there's nothing here" Into the dark I gather, keep, to discipline my dreams of sleep. There in black lies future, bright. A twinkling star in dead of night. A destination, pulls me nearer as I gaze the scrying mirror. What is the future to be hold? Pewter? Silver? Sparks of gold? We cannot test the metal's ply until we look in darkness--SCRY. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Karen- Did I somehow drink from your cup at carnival? The parallels are uncanny between this poem and mine. What do our dreams portend? Better yet who might pretend? Love this There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Jamie? I confess, I wrote this poem as an improv experiment with Sharon (pdv) and I did just read your beautiful poem. If this is too similar, let me know and I'll take care of it, k? and HUGS...I guess I could obviously relate. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this one VERY much....and I will post mine tomorrow..  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Gorgeous This is great, so much to think about  Good to read you. Please excuse me for being slack. It has been a while since I've read you dear. many tight hugs Maree |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Karen-- the similarities are in spirit only-- i guess our hearts are just in the same place ---heh |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Into the darkness round, I peer... illusion of "there's nothing here" Funny, I get the same feeling when I look in my head sometimes!! Rofl…I crack me up sometimes  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmmmm. Interesting, but wonderful Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes.. I scry.. This is a wonderful write.. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A vision of magic fills my eyes as I watched you gaze into the scrying mirror to see if the cloudy vision would clear and show you the true future...Magnificent...Stunning. I love it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
There in black lies future, bright. A twinkling star in dead of night. A destination, pulls me nearer as I gaze the scrying mirror. Ok, but only if I can hold my hands over my eyes and just peek between the fingers. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Scry for me, would you? Love this. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good...good....now to go look up Jamie's.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooo wonderfully dazzling, sweet friend, your wonderful words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....Verrrrrrry interesting...... I have many unusual thoughts in my head now...lol I like this Karen...really like it! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity - I love your poem. At times you write with deep sadness, but they are very good.. More to write, and I will read... BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow...I'm truly flabbergasted. Last night Sharon and I (poet DeVine) just decided to write from the top of our heads--and I must confess that the inspiration from this poem came from reading Jamie's beautiful post, although subconsciously, because for a subject of inspiration, I picked up the nearest catalogue and used the first object I found as my focus. A fun exercize, and I urge you all to try it! Thanks again, for all of your lovely replies! I love this place and the poets that inhabit! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Geesh..your power is always makes my jaw drop, Lady. I love your work. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"descry"? hey girl.... your writing is a continual discovery of you and i am, as always, pulled in by your meter and your honest voice and your talent in line breaks and hell, i just love ya, ok?  and i love this piece, too *smile |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey, can I look into one of your dreams at night, or maybe take just a little peek into the top of your head for an inspiration or two? Excellent write! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity- I'm liking this one lots. Very cool write, my friend. I love the idea of just looking in a catalogue or even a magazine and finding something to focus on in your writing. I'll have to try that...maybe it will help to wake up my sleeping muse. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (02-21-2002 03:51 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ The hour is either early or it's really really late ... at any rate - I can relate ... so I'll be scry y y y ing over you scry y y y ing over you~ Hep me Rhonda ... I need sleep ! I think this is good ... I think~ Well sure it must be .... but ... you left me scry y y y ing over you scry y y y ing over you~ Does it have an OFF button ?????   Coca~Cola only ! ! HONEST INJUN~ Nytol~ *Hugs* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
take a look for me, would you?? excellent in meter and rhyme. . . and uniquely you. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wonderful! I love it! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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