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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-02-22 11:42 PM

Sing to me of Spring's approach
Of gossamer wing and rainbow coach
To peek an eye from Winter's sleep
Of whistling winds and raindrops weep

Sing to me as seasons change
From woolen rags to pastel range
Dressed elegant in formal fines
Of blossoms fair and silken twines

Sing to me of Spring's new morn
Of new returns as hope is born
To dawn another day so sweet
Of weather warm in kind repeat

Copyright Kkh 2/22/02

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-22 11:49 PM

YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is absolutely gorgeous, THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL FIRST POST!!! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kathleen, ay you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! Ooohhhhhh...please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sahring!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

b-raxz^_^
New Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 6
san antonio, texas

2 posted 2002-02-22 11:53 PM

your poem was great! amazing! fantastic! I just loved the way your words just flow so smoothly.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2002-02-22 11:56 PM

A fantastic introduction to our family, Diamond. Thank you for being here and I have little doubt your skill will greatly enhance our site. It's very good to see you

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-02-23 03:46 AM

Welcome, Diamond. I'm ready for some of that spring business. I enjoyed the warmup, thanks.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-02-23 07:12 AM

This is indeed a lovely poem! And I like your message in Constructive Critiques...you ARE a poet in heart, and form! Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-02-23 09:13 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

Wonderful First Post!
I look forward to reading more of your work here.
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2002-02-23 09:38 AM

Great first post - welcome!!!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

8 posted 2002-02-23 10:37 AM

very nice......

Connie

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2002-02-23 12:11 PM

Welcome to our family!!! Your poem is lovely - spring is surely around the corner right? I look forward to reading more from you.

marya2
Junior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 36

10 posted 2002-02-23 12:12 PM

impressed here, you a newbie?
you sound like you've been writing for a time.

marya

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2002-02-23 01:53 PM

ThisDiamond - wlecome, an excellent first post, I like it very much. Spring is coming, smell the scent in the air, it will arrive soon.

BC

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

12 posted 2002-02-23 06:09 PM

wonderfully vivid imagery.... perfect meter and cadence!

lovely!

welcome!

gracianna
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 165
A 14 year hell

13 posted 2002-02-23 07:03 PM

I LOVE this poem! Welcome to PIP!!

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

14 posted 2002-02-23 07:33 PM

Well done!!! Take a bow!! Welcome and boy did I need a touch of spring today...I have to dig out my front porch...it snowed at least 4 inches today!!!

Mystic Mystron
Member

since 2002-02-15

Posts 69
North York .Ontario

15 posted 2002-02-23 08:00 PM

We needed to hear about spring today... Beautiful write!!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

16 posted 2002-02-23 08:10 PM

gorgeous poem!

I love the way you rhyme perfectly. Welcome to passions

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

17 posted 2002-02-23 08:22 PM

Were you familiar with "the passionate bump?" You are now, my dear.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

18 posted 2002-02-23 08:43 PM

nice melody and nice beginning, welcome to Passions and keep up the good work

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

19 posted 2002-02-23 08:55 PM

Enjoyed this diamond...James

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

20 posted 2002-02-24 12:04 PM

Diamond: A beautiful harbinger of spring...welcome to Passions!

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