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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
In this hour As pondering the clouded Curious eyes of fate I wander aimless in step Tripping over again Yet again The same ideas The same insane emotions I think of you. Not what was, But what I imagined On those lone night waits For sun to rise and give light Or at least false warmth To my soul While still pacing paths Spiraled into grey mattered Musings Knowing no answers But longing for at least A moment’s respite From those cold clouded eyes I wish again for your touch |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Me too! So good to read your words again, they say so much of my own thoughs, just a little more coherently  Sandra |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
thanks for the nice words... it is nice to be back at least for a while... perhaps it is when our own hearts and souls become to full or too heavy we have to write... and it is the common human experience that connects us to the words of others. I think mine not better at expressing, but outside the spirals you too walk...making them seem at least for an instant a new way to look at the things inside.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You've been missed, m'friend! And I was just discussing pain as a rather dubious muse with a friend recently. Glad you are back! Hugs. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've touched on it with that correctness that is always present in your words...when we are "too full" and need to release, we write... 'bout time you pushed away from the dinner table...  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I must say you are pouring out the feelings right now...well done.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Oh Ron, we're all so happy you're here aagin with us all, we've all missed you and your wonderful words so much, your thoughts are always so sincere and thought-provoking! (sigh) May comfort and time replace the sorrow, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
May you get everything you wish for... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat Those pondering curious eyes of fate make me wonder too..and seems you are doing much pondering lately, hopefully fate will lift the clouds and bring you sweet clarity. Keep writing! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Cpat Hair - your thoughts written well in this write. Wish you the best... BC |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The wait..the tense..the lonely. Penned brilliantly. Yes..poetry my friend. However you spill it..My hopes for you and a warmer future. Sincerely, Regina |
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