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Lips of Lingerie
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Lips of Lingerie |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Why do I have discreet thoughts of lingerie? thoughts of smooth silk and sheer delights the shaft of the moon glistens like shantung whispering of chantilly love laced with the sweet taste of you each breath caresses like sheer spandex embellished with passionate thoughts Austrian crystals flow like teardrops upon the cleavage of a low-cut night cascades of crepe de chine gently kissed with beaded rain upon the gown of a strapless affair ruby lips of lingerie kisses the edge of your silk collar lost within illusions of love and my studded Casanova of designs "Silence is a friend who will never betray." — Confucius [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-22-2002 01:03 PM).] |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Victoria...I confess to being a bit nervous to read this one, but, I must same, you've done some good things here. Good sounds, descriptions, etc. You've managed to keep it just this side of WOW, which, in my opinion, is good. Well done. Bob |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Victoria I had a very cute answer for your first line and question, but then I would have to edit my own comment!  Very lovely images in this one.Live today like it was your last day on earth! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I'm not sure, but now I think I'm having some thoughts too !!!  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Victoria, am reading more into than is there? LOL [This message has been edited by Mysteria (02-22-2002 01:16 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, I too know these thought sos much and I just love to lose myself in dreams of sheer and silk beauty that comfort me with harmony! (sigh) We all love you so much, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!   Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-22-2002 01:44 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Bob..i like writing on the edge although sometimes one reads more into my poems than i do haa sharon..im sure you did ha...i dont know sharon..what exactly do you have in your sweet mind ha rex..thank you..you just touched my funny bone haa.. noah.. .thank you sweet one..always beautiful comments from you hugss [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-22-2002 03:02 PM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Why now do I have indiscreet thoughts of lingerie? Enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I never had any idea that lingerie could be such a powerful part of a poem....OH yesss, it certainly can...Nice Vic.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nicely done... erotic in a subtle way and as usual very nicely put together, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A wonderfully soft peek into pure loving sweetness. ((Victoria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love this, Vic. But that first line... discrete?? LOL, nothing discrete about these thoughts. Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very sensual clothing and I would imagine you look lovely in it Victoria, hmmmm Victorias secret perhaps...do you have one there? floria Floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thanks richard..well..i dont know..how would i know? ha barry.. thank you so much im glad you enjoyed Pat..i never know where im going until i get there ..thanks for peeking in newell..thank you so much..and for peeking in sandra..its all in ones imagination i guess.. floria..oh i didnt think of that floria ha..yes there is one here..hugs |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Very sensual, very nice. Much enjoyed. Sincerely, Titus The One, The Only... The Titus. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - love this one, really I do. Sensuous, charming, yes. Now for the answer to: "Why do I have discreet thoughts of lingerie?" I know you like,......, and ......, reading romantic ......, and ...... BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Titus..thank you for taking time to read thank you bill..the answer is in the last stanza..ha.. the lipstick on his collar is not hers.. and although she thinks of lingerie and romantic nights with him she thinks of the woman in lingerie whos lipstick is on her casanova lover. Just my mind confusing you i guess haa.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
All I know is I sure am glad that women like to wear lingerie...especially red...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ha..thank you james..  |
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