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bow_down New Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 1philippines |
NOTHINGNESS world of nothingness nothing much more little less no lies no broken promises no agony no loneliness no mess no stress... bring me to the world of nonexistence cause i hate livin in this world of pretense i build blocks of subconcious defense against stimuli tracked by my subliminal sense a world where there aint no no she no he no me no you no nothing but nothing if there be something that'd be nothing non-existense dont even exists in this world no senseless meanings no meaningless words no wars no conflicts no hate no prophecies no predestined fate no faith no laws no evil no god no angels no devil no right no wrong no weak no strong no fallacy no truth trees of nothingness...no fruit i wonder if you'll dare live in this non-existing lair breathe nothing no air cause deep in all us dwells no care id rather stay in here and be one with nothing id rather be like this than try to be something i represent whats real and that be nothing nothingness is our world where realness aint a thing i represent nothing for nothing is real but it seems like nothing aint no big deal for nothing is nothing in nothingness as would have been anything that is senseless am i making sense or i making nothing? when i speak of nothing have you got something? am i senseless am i saying something? either way... that aint nothing!!! [This message has been edited by bow_down (02-19-2002 06:12 AM).] |
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Chris2 New Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 2philippines |
great!!! i'm almost fascinated by this overwhelming creation!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
While we may see opposite ends of the spectrum, this is nothing short of a Welcome to Passions! I think you'll like it around here! Please, check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This sort of reminds me of "Imagine" by John Lennon. Welcome to our humble home.  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hey... wow!! this ain't nothing, that's for sure!! it's something else indeed!! really cool write, here!... sorta spirtually in a realm of nothingness filled with the something of everything all at once!  welcome to the blue pages... i'll look for more from you! (i write a lot myself about nothing and something and everything and all, so the theme sounded familiar...hehe... and y'know what? you came to similar conclusions ..... or something... *grin) loved it! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Very interesting first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work here on the blue pages. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Yes, welcome...what a stupendous first post. I will be pondering this for quite some time I'm sure. There are so many levels here...impressed!!! |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
whoa, I read this twice now and I really like it! I can see that Im going to love your poetry. WELCOME!! Make yourself comfortable and enjoy yourself  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
bow_down- This is excellent...I love it! Welcome to Passions!  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Congratulations on an excellent write about nothing. Except it really is something, the way you put this together. Interesting first post. Welcome to Passions, where you can unload your mind with some more of this nothing stuff. You'll have many readers. |
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