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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Ease back into me lose yourself with desire for my touch or we could do a crossword it doesn’t matter what we do just come home I miss you |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Duncan darling boy this is utterly utterly outstandingly good. I love this write from you. How can you say so much with so few words, YOU constantly amaze me. This is seriously excellent writing, the flow of this is perfect, the internal pace and the construction cannot be bettered   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  :kissTo give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Duncan...I am embarrassed to say that this is the first of your postings that I've read. My loss. That will be rectified. Nicely done. Bob |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ease back into me lose yourself with desire for my touch ======================= ok..ya got me...... *sigh*  ya know Duncan...."men of few words" are usually a sore spot for me LOL .... but you make an art out of brievity. You take the "less is more" lesson to a higher level.... at that altitude...one can only breath deep .... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan, You are one of the romantics here that make me sigh every time.  This is so touching.. so simple. Wonderful  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
A plea of the heart. I like this. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love can be enjoyed in so many ways, she'll be back soon D, then you can do either one or both  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
just come home I miss you I love these words. Very much enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely said... concise, and well formed. Good stuff. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A delightful and sweet read PoetFriendDuncan... *~coco~* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Duncan, that first bit was steamy.. Sure would make me come home. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, such soft yearning fills your words! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you froever hold true love close to your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I have little doubt she will love this one, good sir. No wonder she fell for you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A flexible fellow...I like that! And I like this! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sigh..... dear Cowboy how could she possibly refuse?! makes me want to come running |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW, I always love your short verses, they say so much. A delightful poem, Sir. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ya have to like a guy who gets right to the point. Well said and I hope she comes home soon! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - My words go out to you in hope that what you write will happen... BC |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Marsha Thanks! I think I liked your response better than my poem. lol Bob Nice to meet you and Thanks! JM LOL @ you. Brevity only exists in my poetry. Where, yes, I think the 'less is more' thing works well for me. Btw...Thanks for reading between the lines in my last post. You got it! Tara Now, that makes me smile! Thanks. JK Mitchell Thanks, yes it is. walker In so many ways! Thanks...as always! Nightshade Thank you so much! Ron Hell, I'm just glad to see you back for awhile! Thanks. Coco Thanks...you're sweet, yourself! Sandra Yeah, I was tempted to continue on a bit with that first verse...then thought not. lol Thank you. Noah Soft yearning, I like that. Thanks! Balladeer I am good, huh? LMAO Seriously though, she does seem to bring out the best of me. Sunshine Like Gumby! Thank you. SEA She's only away on business, was just missing her (it's been over 24 hours!! lol) and put it to pen. I love it when I make you sigh. Titia So nice to see you, again. Thanks as always. Nancy It was really the only thing I could feel, so was easy to get to the point. Thanks! BC She'll be back on Sunday. Was just indulging in a bit of melancholy. Now, if I can just find something to do for the next 48 hours! |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Just thought you'd like to know that I sent this as an e-card to someone using the wonderful e-card feature here at Passions. It spoke my mind perfectly... "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thank you, Siofra...I don't think that's ever happened to me before. Thank you very much. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, You too? My sweetie is visiting the grandkids in Michigan! Nice write friend. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Duncan- Gotta love those crosswords! LOL! Seriously...I love this. How could anyone resist. Very well done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I miss you too. Oops. I'm pretty sure you meant Tracey, not Kacy. Stay here at the board. We can keep you busy for a few hours. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
You have said so much from your heart with so few words.No wonder why you stile her heart. Peaches |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
This is exquisitely done. Keep writing! Neha |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Sweet You must show this to her upon her return. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awwww, who could resist such a request from you! I surely couldnt, Don't tell noah i said that lol. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
By now she should be home and in your arms where you will show her how much you missed her....a wonderful poem...I love it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hi honey I’m home…did you notice I was gone??? Guess so huh?? You know I only go away so you can miss me. Lmao. Now help me with that crossword, I can’t get 26 down, or 38 across, or… If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Duncan, I always look at the write, as well as read it... You made a candle...a guiding light back. Nice. ThisDiamond |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Duncan I do love how you write, You say so much in such a few words. Difficult to do and turn out this nice. great write. floria Floria |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Duncan, crosswords are good as long as they're not cross words. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so much said with so few words. well done Duncan. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Duncan! This is an impressive bit of writing tight and getting in right! It was a delightful read. Thanks for sharing it with us. I've really enjoyed your poems. Shenachie |
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