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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-03-06 10:58 PM

Once upon a rising moon,
...I sailed to heaven's far,
Encaptured in night's sensual dance,
...I touched upon a star,
You took my hand and led me there,
...in glow of welkin's light,
Until we reached far end of ever,
...beyond the dark of night.
I tasted of sweet love divine,
...as kissed your satin lips,
As at the helm of Southern Cross,
...we sailed on passion's ship.
We danced as one to Muses' song,
...until the night was done,
Entwined in rhythm of lover's waltz,
...'til warmth of dawning's sun.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-03-06 11:04 PM

Your format reminds me of another poet here...a favored one who hasn't shown himself in quite a while...

in the meantime, I think I shall read this again, I enjoyed it so much the first time around...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-06 11:13 PM

(sigh) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always so magical and bring a smile to my face everytime to the surreal beauty I see! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

3 posted 2002-03-06 11:14 PM

Sunshine, I am glad you enjoyed my little poem.
(some poets change their email, lose their password and after several unsuccessful attempts to get their password, go ahead and post under another name. I don't know if any favored poets have had that problem, but I know of one fellow who attempts poetry who had that problem, *smile*)

[This message has been edited by Tim (03-06-2002 11:17 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-03-06 11:20 PM

Love this one Tim. Lovely flow and rhyme.
Enjoyed ever so much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-03-06 11:28 PM

*sigh* now this is the kind of dance that would give me the most wonderful satisfaction....I melted from words that sang with passion and talent...I would bestow a kiss of great delight upon your lips, sir poet...I love this poem...it goes into to my library...thank you for the magic that it made me feel...**big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

6 posted 2002-03-06 11:30 PM

A classical beauty in this poem. I can see the hand of the old masters in this elegant, dancing poem. Thank you so much for posting it. ***Ivy Rose

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-03-06 11:39 PM

Beautifully penned Tim...

Enjoyed your words

~Victoria~

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-03-07 01:45 AM

Tim~
I'd recognize the beauty of your thoughts anywhere~

This did remind me of the special spirit of a friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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