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Sadness of The Wait
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Sadness of The Wait |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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My heart feels the sadness of the wait Sands fill my shoes, slow a strong gait. Rivers of feelings flow within my vein I yearn to see, want to hear once again. Past moments flit before reddened eyes Scenes of passion bring gasps and sighs Prints upon sand now vanished, gone Forlorn feelings of a veil, a mist alone. Must the heart shatter to then heal? Suffering from visions false and real. Beating alone in the absence of one. Waiting, watching, is love now done? A portrait of beauty, soft velvet smile. A smatter of lost words...for a while. Left to ponder, writing words blue. Wishing, waiting, wanting just you. [This message has been edited by Magnus (02-14-2002 09:37 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lonesome post on Valentines Night...fictional, surely! Well done, Magnus! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Poignant and beautiful, Magnus. Corinne |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww, this is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so well too and I still wait to actually hold my dream girl close to my heart, but just finding her now has made me so happy and I know deep down love will come to all! (sigh) We all love you so much, this is fabulous, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ...yes, surely...she is resting...a long day...Thanx... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Barry...take her in a cup of tea and a rose and she will perk up and give you a big Valentine smooch! ~Valentine Hugs to you and yours, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Rose?....oh yes...I remember one of those.. Thanx Nancy... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy Oh my what an absolutely soul filled write this is, I love the flow of it. Sorrowful yes but oh how well you write of heartache, I never could and being happy I definitely can’t. In fact I’m of the opinion I can’t write anything much when I’m happy. YOU however definitely can write anything, and everything I’ve never seen a bad piece from you not ever. Oh how I wish I could write like this. Absolutely wonderful writing I love it Another for my library   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
sadly beautiful and beautifully sad There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marsha darling girl...you can write like this...just put yourself in the vision and let the words fly... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Jamie...tis true...sadly so... and so sadly... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - sadness is in this write, but the words flow with rythmn and grace... BC |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Magnus - I definitely felt the sadness in every word of this fine write. Dave |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Hi Barry; I decided to stop in and read some of your wonderful poetry. Very well written as always. Wanda |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Magnus- This is absolutely beautiful. Wonderfully written, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Barry, I hope that your broken heart has healed and even better...I hope that this beautiful poem is fictional and that it was never broken in the first place.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Magnus--You write these sad words so well, I know you have already broken and mended. Well done! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You write so well of the broken heart sadly waiting for the moment of healing. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
OK Magnus, you know how we keep telling each other how good our work is? And of course I love all of yours...THIS IS GREAT.... I so very much love this, the sentiment is wonderful, the flow and rhyme and rhythm, this is fantastic, floria Floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely written Barry..with bittersweet ink ~Vic "Silence is a friend who |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
sadness of the wait I like the tile of this poem enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a pain you share! I like it...I feel it. Nice. |
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