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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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In this Moment ~~~ Snowflakes brush eyelashes while catching drifting stars The flakes alight upon your tongue as laughter heals your scars ~ A fingered touch surrounds your waist Each breath soars crystal haze A whisper tingles close to cheek unspoken fears erased ~ In this moment does the heart recall the isolation within yesterday's blizzard? ~~~ Crash Test 'Drunk Drivers' ... spare the dummies! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i love this and especially the last verse rex...  ~Vic |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! I loved it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rex, Enjoyed the read. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You weren't supposed to make me tear up... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Rex! This is sooo good! ~Hugs, Nancy~ *Love your sig line* ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Hello Rex Thoyght I look in and found another nice piece created by you, Very nice, like it The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice images, Rex. Enjoyed. Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is terrific Rex, loved the last few lines. floria Floria |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...your last lines made me smile, sweet friend, you always create such gorgeous visions and imagery with your voice! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rex, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Rex darling boy I think this is utterly utterly spectacular. The flow the construction the rhythm all combine to make this a truly outstandingly fabulous poem. Rarely is writing this good, certainly this far exceeds my expectations and my expectations for you are always high. YOU are a very good writer and this proves it. Absolutely excellent work   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
As I am reading this one, Rex...we are having what I hope will be the last snowfall of the season. Your poem looks just like what I am seeing outside my window.  Beautifully done. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A fingered touch surrounds your waist Rex - Well now, I'm a gonner with these few words. Loved this!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A fingered touch surrounds your waist Each breath soars crystal haze A whisper tingles close to cheek unspoken fears erased ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Rex...I came back for another read and wouldn't ya know it...my sister beat me to it and she chose the same favourite lines as I??!! "A fingered touch surrounds your waist"...how sensually touching....wow! Okay...I'm gone again....take care. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This was a pleasant surprise to find this bumped up to run the gauntlet once again ... this forum has such wonderful people and a busy little leprechaun that deserves a big Irish hug Thankyou all so much ... you warm my heart |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Once bumped and rebumped... Like it or bump it... I like it.. Oh.. and I bumped it...  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Like it or bump it LOL Nan, you're too much! Thanks |
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