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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2002-03-10 08:05 AM


Whimper Snivel Snuffle Blubber
~~~


Whimper
snivel
snuffle
blubber ...
reduced compose produces
slobber
~
Freezer burns
about your chest
concealing wounds
till fountain rests?
~
Through mold and dank
a tear still runs
supplies a glitter
to rising sun
~
A rainbow stretches
cheek to cheek
when scattered teardrops fall
So
whimper
snivel
snuffle
blubber ...
implies to eyes of all
~~~


© Copyright 2002 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-10 08:13 AM



Ah melancholy the mood is this day then, and sure to be you've brought me out of mine...

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2 posted 2002-03-10 08:56 AM


Nice, different and quaint, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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3 posted 2002-03-10 12:49 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Rex, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart knows this kind of feeling so very well, and only recently have I been able to rebuild and reveal these wounds through the words I write! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rex, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-10 12:53 PM


well this was sure different rex...a fun read..

                ~Vic

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-- James Joyce


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5 posted 2002-03-10 09:30 PM


Can I join you in whimpering a sniveling? Or maybe I’ll just scream and jump up and down instead. Do you mind? (not one of my better days I’m afraid!! Lol)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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6 posted 2002-03-10 09:48 PM


Gee Rex...is everyone having one of 'those' days?  I may join you, if it's okay.  
Fun write!  Hugs, Nancy.

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     is someone to wish for you.~

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
7 posted 2002-03-11 07:57 AM


Thanks all ... I must admit it was fun to write this one and the moral is ... don't be a bottle cap

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