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Dancing In Moonbeams
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Dancing In Moonbeams |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“DANCING IN MOONBEAMS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I have the feeling, want you close, my arms ache for your embrace… What better way would there be, to hold you close, outside this place… My eyes are closed, I cannot see, who would come with me tonight… Take my hand, be my guide, embrace me, in the dimmest light… Love me in shadows, in a warm breeze, know my touch, end your heartaches… Your hips I touch, yours on my waist, closer your warmth, a being awakes… Two we are, melting into each other, my heart I give, only yours in return… Dancing in moonbeams, soft as you, romance will we have, as we learn… ~~~~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lovely romantic piece, Bill. Write one! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I like this for too many reasons BC. . . it's perfect in form and rhyme. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ There is no place better to be then dancing in moonbeams.....I adore these soft romantic touches you bring to these pages of blue....  Lauren~ Step through the |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, you are sooooooo romantic, I can't help but smile every time I read your words knowing such a loving friend like you with a golden heart that has so much love to gove! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your love forever bring stars to your skies and smiles to your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is utterly utterly excellent, now this is one of your utter best. No one does romance like you do and if they did there’s no one who does it better. Flawlessly executed in form and rhyme, utterly outstandingly good. As I’ve been heard to say darling boy YOU are a real writer  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Simply beautiful words Bill."Dancing in moonbeams, soft as you," great line. floria Floria |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so beautiful and filled with the magic that dancing in the moonbeams would feel like...**sigh** I love it...romantically perfect...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very romantic Bill! I love the way the words danced down the page.....hugs, Nancy.  ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Simply Beautiful! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so romantic, Bill.  and beautifully written copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - I loved this one. If we dance together, will you promise to dip me? Gently though, okay? lol. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
All this dancing going on around here lately. Don't you wish we cold really all be out tangoing together tonight? Sandra |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...This is just exquisite. A very passionate and heart-warming piece. ILOVED IT!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Keep it up Bill and I will be inspired to stick out my thumb and hit those highways and byways to find out your secret!! Awesome write!!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
To all - thank you for all the warm replies to this. And were does everyone find all of these beautiful inserts? If anyone would, please email me with a couple sites, or ICQ me... BC |
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