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Chemically Imbalanced Kisses
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Chemically Imbalanced Kisses |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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His Kiss infused with the passion of seductive, frothy Cristal born of desire wrapped in gold. His Kiss Sinfully intoxicating far more so than the finest wine consumed in drunken foolishness and love. His Kiss taste of sweetest honey clinging to lips leaving soul marks imprinted with forever. His Kiss offered to this dying woman parched in the desert I drank from the mirage coated with deceit. His Kiss forceful enough to shatter the most formidable resolve I crumpled into him and then awoke alone again. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (02-26-2002 09:50 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nicely presented... and some nice use of form. Sad in content but then again many things in life are not comprised of rainbow endings and sunlit strolls... an excellent write.... that makes the reader want to offer comfort..and a promise of more than waking alone. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very sad, sometimes the magic can be deceiving in passion, but very soon you will find true love to hold close forever and you will forever suckle the true sweetnes sof love! (kiss on chyeek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you deserve the greatest happiness always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
His Kiss tastes of sweetest honey clinging to lips leaving soul marks imprinted with forever. I love that verse~~ and yes, deceit is a bitter pill to swallow, Nicely done Sandra~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . I like the form of this. . . the flow of words like that dream that we all have. . . and yet, the glass. . . well done my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice catalinamoon...James |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Damn, don’t ya just hate waking up from a dream like that? Such a beautiful, loving feeling….then the alarm!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sandra, I love your poem! ((Sandra)) xx -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - this written from the heart for sure. Powerful, and very telling. Excellent write... BC |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Sad, but powerful.Deciet is a hard thing to swallow.I hope you find love soon. Peaches |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I kiss EXACTLY like that!  LOL! Enjoyed much, Sandra.  *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling*Opps...has my phantom lover been visiting you again....just can't seem to get him to stay after he kisses us so well in our sleep...Boy..did I ever feel this poem...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sounds like he was cristal lite Well written and presented. I loved it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful poem, Sandra...I bet you hated to wake up from it.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Her kiss,containing enough virus's to give me the flu. paladin |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow, do I like this Catalina, I know what a chemical imballance is, and this was very fitting. great write. floria Floria |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A lovely flowing write...that drew me in till those final lines...where the feeling of loneliness descended unexpectedly Love ..& Hugs ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sweetie, Smilling at you from afar but my heart feels your emotions as if you were right here friend, Me thinks in spring we should get together again or when your weather is wormer cause I am a whimp in the cold, just a thought maybe (~.~) beautiful poetry by the way. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A loving kiss is something one never forgets, even in aloneness...beautifully done, Sandra hugss M |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
His Kiss offered to this dying woman parched in the desert I drank from the mirage coated with deceit. His Kiss forceful enough to shatter the most formidable resolve I crumpled into him and then awoke alone again. Really like the form you used with this, Sandra. Love the title!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I feel the loneliness of this...but also the beauty of it as well. Nicely done Sandra.. |
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Hopefloats Junior Member
since 2001-10-30
Posts 26NH |
Perfect description of your emotions.....You never cease to amaze me........(((more hugs)) Deb |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
that's so sad that it was only a dream. I really liked the desert metaphor! Thanks for the read!-R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dontcha just hate when ya get kissed that way? I prerer those long deep wet ones.....lmao. Deceit is a very bitter pill to swallow, but I have swallowed a few in my days. Hugs to you Cat. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
If we could only dream of those kisses everynight...love the form hon..hugss..nicely done as always ~Vic |
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