Open Poetry #19 |
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Vanilla bean for you in my Dreams |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869![]() |
Sometimes love changes with time but the love I have for you still smoothly flows like a rhyme sometimes wishes are too much to ask maybe I don't deserve but fantasies and memories of the past life is but a song a dance till the end than walking away only looking back now and than I wanted to share chocolate ice cream or your favorite vanilla bean to share it with you in my dreams but you always wanted the cherry on top I felt like a miscellaneous item in a novelty shop love still flows like sweet Hershey syrup upon rocky mountains of love sugar and spice and everything nice and always a double dip of me for you "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." -- James Joyce [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-28-2002 05:02 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I wanted to share cherry garcia or your favorite vanilla bean to share it with you in my dreams but you always wanted the cherry on top I felt like a miscellaneous item in a novelty shop love still flows like sweet Hershey syrup upon rocky mountains of love sugar and spice and everything nice and always a double dip of me for you" ![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Mmmmmmmmm...this is a delicious and beautiful vision of true love, sweet friend, may your love forever hold your hand and take you over Jolly Raancher rainbows and over the cotton candy clouds of loves heavens! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is absolutely beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
come now Vic....now I am craving a big scoop of my favorite ice cream....Beautiful poem.. like it... |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you noah...i changed it to chocolate..thought it sounded better..although i love cherry garcia too ha...hugs thank you barry...yes a double dip will do ya.. ![]() |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Victoria Wow! This was beautifully written and so very clever.....I loved it! I hope you are well. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Sue..yes i am well and hope you are too..nice to hear from you hugss ~Vic |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweets can be great, and still your stomach hurts later. ![]() Sandra |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
haa...you always make me laugh sandra..nothing we love is good for us ha..not fair is it? hugss ~Vic |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~V~ you could never be a miscellaneous item *s hugss M |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you hon...i know ![]() ~Victoria~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Your lines are beutiful. "life is but a song a dance till the end" Beautiful as always Victoria, floria Floria |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you dear one hugss..always nice hearing from you.. ~Vic |
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