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Interloper

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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-21 10:39 AM

Good morning Sunshine!
Listen to SEA’s thundering surf
and gurgling tide.
No wonder Capt Ron happily sails,
enjoying Enchantess’ spells,
under the Catalinamoon.
Siofra playing the Zinsser
While Janet Marie Sys
and the ‘Deer sings sweetly
of the serenity
enjoyed my Mistletoe Angel
while strewing Rosepetals
as the Lady in White
discovers a Silver Streak
in her hair.
Wayoutwalt says “amusemi
Professor Gloom,
or speak of love
like walker.”
Martie wonders, aloud to
Cocobaci what the Fee
is for all this entertainment.
One slick lady,
after discussing the subject with Ron,
said it is crazy4u
to pay even one Saunni
because Tempress has picked up the tab.
Now, Larry C observed his Lonely Shadow
and asked Lucie if she liked
the Ivy Rose he sent her
with the butterflykiss enclosed.
She replied, “Don’t bother me, DragonFang,
I shed enough Tiers with these allergies.
Besides, Sven sends me chocolates.”
RSWells sings the BluesSerenade
under the midnitesun
as a Maverick Wolf howls in response.
That Gentle Spirit, severen,
enjoying cerenity with Bill Charles,
a poetic dreamer, sighs while watching
a Melissa Honeybee rest on an Irish Rose.
Doreen, that Auguste woman
with green eyes, drives by
in her RMW, telling Duncan
to get his grubbymitts
off her vandana.
Now, Christopher,
driving his new Mysteria,
with Kethry beside
and Regina in the back seat,
passed them, waved,
and sped toward the rising strbbux.
So goes another day and night at Passions.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-21-2002 11:27 AM).]

Silver Streak
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1 posted 2002-02-21 10:42 AM

No apoligies need, here. This is fantastically woven, dear Interloper. I love it.

((Interloper))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-02-21 10:44 AM

Very clever use of the names!! I enjoyed this so much!

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-02-21 10:51 AM

Fun stuff, and I think this is pretty hard to do.

Sandra

Martie

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4 posted 2002-02-21 11:04 AM

Interloper

Thanks for the smile this morning!

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-21 11:10 AM

BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! I'm impressed, you speak of all the wonderful poets that make up Passions so beautifully in your words, we all love you so much!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) This is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

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Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-02-21 11:20 AM

Interloper darling boy OH my oh my this is soooooooooo full of delight it gave me a fabulous smile and this week I really need it. YOU have as always written this wonderfully.

This must have been very hard to weave together

Truly outstanding writing and I love it love it love it.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Duncan
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7 posted 2002-02-21 11:20 AM

But I thought doreen liked my grubbymits?!?! You crack me up, Dr. Love!

Cpat Hair

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8 posted 2002-02-21 11:24 AM

(chuckling) Clever work my friend...

Tiersdin
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east coast

9 posted 2002-02-21 11:28 AM

Ditto all of the above and then some!

*chuckles*

loved this!

~Tier

Sven

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10 posted 2002-02-21 11:31 AM

I bow with humble deference to the Great Voice of the Southland and his creative use of the language that created this treasure. . .

well done Sir. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-02-21 11:46 AM

woman
with green eyes, drives by
in her RMW, telling Duncan
to get his grubbymitts
off her vandana.

TOOO funny!!! you are so clever and so witty...I loved this....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2002-02-21 12:15 PM

Interloper - this is a great write inserting the poets into this poem. Nice work, nicely done...

BC

amigo
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

13 posted 2002-02-21 12:56 PM

What a fun day at Passions, Doc,
This surely calls for a pat on your back
You seem to have a special knack
To display the gems from your treasured stock

Enjoyed this, thank you....

RSWells
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14 posted 2002-02-21 12:57 PM

Thanks for the inclusion. Enjoyed

Saunni
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West Virginia

15 posted 2002-02-21 01:08 PM

Interloper, this is sooo cool! Very, very creative! I don't know how you did this but it's incredible!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan

16 posted 2002-02-21 01:24 PM

This is really cute, Interloper...
I very much enjoyed it...

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

walker
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17 posted 2002-02-21 01:55 PM

This is just too cute.

Dulcinea
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IN

18 posted 2002-02-21 02:51 PM

*LOL* All I could do was laugh! This is too funny! Nice work!

amusemi
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A State of Disarray

19 posted 2002-02-21 03:04 PM

Oh wow!! What a tribute to us all...Thanks!!

Kat Savin'this!

butterflykiss989
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since 2002-02-19

Posts 52

20 posted 2002-02-21 03:28 PM

That was so cute... I liked it alot... and I was very surprised to see my name in it.. thank u... u have a ton of talent cause that looked hard to do and you did it very very well.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

21 posted 2002-02-21 04:06 PM

...Interloper!...GOOD STUFF!...~Hugs, Nancy~...

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

22 posted 2002-02-21 04:26 PM

hey...nice to know i woke up today in passions...giggle...helen

Midnitesun

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Gaia

23 posted 2002-02-21 04:37 PM

LOL, this is funny, sweet, creative, great!
You put so many beating hearts in here. Thanks for including me in your day and night reveries.

Fee
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since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

24 posted 2002-02-21 04:40 PM

Pure Masterpeice... Well Done.

I really enjoyed the read, bought a smile to my face, this morning.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

suthern

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Louisiana

25 posted 2002-02-21 04:41 PM

Well done and very enjoyable! *S*

strbbux
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26 posted 2002-02-21 06:47 PM

HAHAHA this is fantastic Interloper, hmmm, nice to end it with that great starbucks coffee. LOL, you did a great job with this. very entertaining. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

rwood
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Tennessee

27 posted 2002-02-21 08:02 PM

Woven only as you could!..and I really like being in the back seat! Very witty deploy of verse. Hugs to you!

Sincerely,
Regina

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

28 posted 2002-02-21 08:07 PM

No need to apologize for the imagery of a slew of poets interloping along life's poetry...

Siofra

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State of Suspended Passion

29 posted 2002-02-21 08:20 PM

whatsa Siofra doin' with a Zinser?

I like this just as much as I liked the last one you did...if not more. Thanks for making me smile on an bad night.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

doreen peri
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Virginia

30 posted 2002-02-21 09:46 PM

ya got me pegged! LOL!!!

quite clever, you innovative poet, you!!!

i loved it!!

Larry C

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31 posted 2002-02-21 10:20 PM

Interloper,
Well aren't you just a clever boy! And tired too I'll bet. Awesome job my man. Awesome job.

jennirey
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North Richland HillsTx

32 posted 2002-02-21 10:51 PM

Very clever!! I like it..

Jen

Startime
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33 posted 2002-02-21 10:58 PM

Hey!!!No reason for you to apologize...this is beautiful and filled with your wonderful talent...I love every word of it...**big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SEA

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with you

34 posted 2002-02-21 11:06 PM

I love how you do this!!!

Balladeer

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35 posted 2002-02-21 11:13 PM

I've always wanted to see a rising strbbux!!

A very nice weave here, interloper

Ivy Rose
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36 posted 2002-02-21 11:15 PM

Interloper...how skillfully you have woven the awesome talent of Passions in this wonderful poem. Thank you for the great present you gave to all of us. ***Ivy Rose

Gentle Spirit
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37 posted 2002-02-22 06:19 AM

I love it, I just love it! This is so cute, no apologies needed. Hugs to you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

38 posted 2002-02-22 07:38 AM

very cute

enjoyed it very much

Charisma

CocoBaci
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39 posted 2002-02-22 10:15 PM

hiya Interloper, I gotta hand it2u this was sweeeeeeeeeeet!
Smiles2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

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