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Doppelganger
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I watched, As in your daily form You walked before me To do those things I know nothing about Going to places I only imagined. The twinge The one that twists In stomach turned regretful Again grabbed me As I dreamed of what Never was Or would be In need I must now find A new route And not see again Someone else in you. Not feel The void Still… I watch knowing You are not her And wishing you were Yet relieved you are not. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome back, Ron. Sure missed your work on these pages  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice to see you indeed... and with such an introspective piece.. I like your way with doppelgangly words...  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The twinge The one that twists In stomach turned regretful Again grabbed me As I dreamed of what Never was Or would be So good to read you, again Ron. Your writing always finds a part of me it recognizes. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed reading this Captain, a pleasure as always! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat--Sometimes the shadow of another falls across the present and warps perception. I know this feeling. I like the way you write! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Such complex feelings, this expresses it well. Sandra |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Doppelganger is my favorite big word to use  Very interesting piece...-R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Being torn between what we want is hard. You penned it well. "What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...it's been a long time since I've ever heard that word, it made me smile seeing it here! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this si so wonderfully expressed! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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