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Open Poetry #19

Girls to Women

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-02-20 09:53 PM

Girls to Women
Little girls and there friends
Whats up with the whole lot of them
One day you can't keep them apart
The next they take a oath never to talk

This changes only slightly
When women were suposed to be
Fierce competition, from men to shoes
All the while smiling, making fun of hair dews

Why do we do this to our own
Shouldn'e we stand together
Inform the whole world, Let it be known
Were not pawns in some olden time game

There are some women that this they do
But the numbers are far to few
Were Doctors, SnowBorders what else who knows
But ripping each other up when cellulite shows

Mollest, rape, domestic violence are a few
Of the abuses girls and women go through
Standing together a hudge force we would be
The world could change, this is something
I would love to see

By
Connie McDonald
Copyright@2001
April 9, 2001

O_Dara
Junior Member

since 2002-02-20

Posts 11

1 posted 2002-02-20 10:00 PM

makes you think??what if??Good write!
O_Dara

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-20 10:43 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I too wish that harmony could come between girls and women and people of all ages, young and mature, and that we can all live together comfortably in the spirit of mankind! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is very touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!