Open Poetry #19 |
Some Times I Write |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Some times I write knowing knowing you read read to see my okay or not where has my winter taken me and how is my despair my joy You show me you care with your white space In that place I see you so clear nodding your head and smiling I blow you a kiss [This message has been edited by Martie (02-20-2002 09:41 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and I throw you a hug.... Some times you write? Oh dear, indeed you do.... |
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O_Dara Junior Member
since 2002-02-20
Posts 11 |
Excellent,very good read! O_Dara |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You show me you care with your white space In that place I see you so clear nodding your head and smiling I blow you a kiss ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ No words just now Martie...just a big hug. Nancy. ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yes, she sure has a way of lighting up a room even when she is not in it, through that white space. Martie what a loving poem. Live today like it was your last day on earth! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, your beautiful words are always a delight to read, sweet friend, here's some extra big hugs for you! (EXTRA BIG HUGS) YAY!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sis~ Indeed, poetess~ Yes ... you do~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
nodding and smiling here, Martie |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A kiss on the cheek, my precious friend. *hugs* Michael Auguste~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This deserves a bunch of kisses...James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sometimes I read knowing the words said say only the part hiding the depths from eys not meant to breathe the liquid soul as usual Martie.... I enjoyed. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And I'm grateful for each time you do. *S* Smiles here. *S* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, you DO write ... magnificently Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Martie- Yes, you do...and it's always beautiful. Big hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
...and glad we are that you do!! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
And dear Martie here are some ((((hugs)))) just for you. floria Floria |
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Sunshine
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am glad I found this....it is a very special piece...one that I relate to well. Reading and wondering if the words of another are showing a mood, is it real? Hoping that all is OK...that they are not hurt....So many that we have a bond of heart with...yet never having seen the other or touched their hands.... Though...most certainly they have touched us in many many ways..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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