Open Poetry #19 |
Because Of You |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
It was you who made me smile As you chased the dark clouds away It was you who stayed with me On my dark depressing days It was you who brought me sunshine And made my spirit soar so high In your presence I felt invincible Like I could almost touch the sky You took my hand and gave me love A love so pure like the wings of a dove You opened up my eyes and made me see How much love existed inside of me With your words of wisdom you guided me Away from my sadness and grief Finally I learnt how to smile again As I experienced such feelings of relief Your brought me so much confidence I once lacked within myself No longer did I feel like an ornament That collected dust upon a shelf You gave my life new meaning There was nothing I couldn't do How wonderful they are These feelings I have for you Suetang |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done Susie Q as always.....enjoyed ~Vic |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Cool...well said! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sue! You wrote a Keeper! I like each and every line, for several wonderful reasons! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, may love forever sing in your heart and bring music to your soul forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is a special poem about a very special person it seems. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is a special poem about a very special person it seems. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice Sue...enjoyed this one tonight! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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