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The Loft
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The Loft |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
The Loft You wrote and asked about the loft, with words that trailed as though a wave tossed from a path. "After thought," they seemed to say. Or, "I'm detached." I could not tell. I counted spaces, hoping that the paragraph was, like the railing, close at hand and sure enough. You said "relax," and that seemed right, though in the summer, late at night, more than below, I feel the warm approach of words like love and cautious. This is my hiding place you know. RMW |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This...is wonderful.. A gem, a surprise... I love it..  K |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Bob A loft takes the warm from down, seems it would be cozy and safe and small. The heart can hide anywhere though. Very glad to see you posting. Your poems always leave me pondering. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Severn....thank you. I value your thoughts. Bob Martie...pondering is good. Smiling. Bob |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah good! Another fair poet comes home! We are embraced in poetic flair, and rightly so...you've been away far too long! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Sounds like a great hiding place…just waiting for someone to find it. I like the write, read it a couple of times now. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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