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When You See Through
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When You See Through |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
When you see through your heart you see through , The love that We had, When you know It Is true It Is really happenning Even though We have been so much When you see through your heart you see a love that last long When you see It And It Is true When you see through your heart You see a love so deep, When you see through your eyes When even you are sad You see How time really had changed your life? When you see through eveything, Everything that you have been, When you see through, So much.... [This message has been edited by vandana (03-10-2002 07:29 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Vandana and I see a lot in and through this poem, nicely done, floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very pretty, vandana. ((vandana)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, there is always so much to see through your words, so much love always shines from your heart! (kiss on cheek) May you and your love forever share a lifetime of happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, NoaEaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is so good to see you writing, we don't get enough of you.... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Nicely written Vandana. I enjoyed your poem as I always do. I can only imagine hard it is to write poetry in a second language. |
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