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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-20 02:52 PM

Unheard

I have cried
my last tear
while I saw you
sipping beer
you did not see me
standing there
a birthday party
unaware
invisible then
as before
invisible in
the love I wore
I have finally
got the proof
you are hers
I saw the truth
I left the room
without a word
a birthday greeting
gone unheard

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-02-20 02:55 PM

Slick,
Excellent write.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-02-20 03:08 PM

I am crying.

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-02-20 03:28 PM

I always find it amazing that we hear what is never said. . .

powerfully done helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-02-20 03:47 PM

invisible then
as before
invisible in
the love I wore

Your poetry blows me away yet again. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2002-02-20 08:41 PM

I've always thought of life as being full of rooms. Some so huge we can't see from wall to wall, others almost claustrophobic in their smallness. All these rooms have doors.
I think it's time for you to walk out of this particular room, close the door behind you,
and hang a sign on the knob that says...Memory Only.

Smile...

jimmy

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2002-02-20 09:26 PM

sad..... and so very painfull... know this all to well

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

7 posted 2002-02-20 10:18 PM

My, how you transform a tear . . .

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-02-20 11:09 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Helen, this is so very sad, I don't understand how anyone could ever forget your birthday like that, it is that persons fault, my heart cries out to you! (kiss on cheek) Know you are loved by many and you will never be forgotten by all your true friends, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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