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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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0 posted 2002-02-19 01:33 AM

Why does the wind whisper your name?
whispering haunting words of love
whispers of ballerina roses
quietly dancing in the fallen snow
and the chill of wintry nights
becomes passion rising within a breeze
ablaze with the fever of your lips

Why does the wind whisper your name?
in the shadows of what could have been
when I was she and you were mine
entwined within a foolish dream
while the clown of fate was laughing
in the wings of "I told you so"
as velvet petals bled upon my heart

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-19-2002 09:55 AM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-02-19 03:04 AM

Lovely Victoria...James

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2002-02-19 03:33 AM

Victoria, this is a bittersweet beauty.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-02-19 06:28 AM

Why does the wind do that to us? It's a plot. That's it!
You said it well, Vic.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

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4 posted 2002-02-19 08:48 AM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautifully bittersweet, dearest friend, it too always amazes me how love can call to us in such an exlusive way yet sometimes it just seems to bleed! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a graceful wonderful poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-02-19 08:53 AM

Victoria,
Lovely bittersweet. Enjoyed

Victoria

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Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-02-19 09:59 AM

thank you james...hugs

dee...thank you for peeking in hugss

sandra..ha you are funny ...hugss

noah...hugss

sy...thank you so much..im glad you enjoyed..hugs

Kathleen
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since 2002-02-19

Posts 20
Indiana

7 posted 2002-02-19 11:38 AM

enjoyed this Victoria, your poetry is always soft, delicate.....

Kathleen
(Irish Rose)
"My God is an awesome God"

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

8 posted 2002-02-19 12:52 PM

Victoria... even when you write sad.. it has a gentle tone to it. Good writing.
alan

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-02-19 01:09 PM

Victoria~
Really enjoyed this one bunches~
The winds of remember encircle us~
Lovely thoughts, hon~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Victoria

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Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-02-19 01:10 PM

thank you dear kathleen..so nice to hear from you as always hugs

alan ..thank you for your kind comments..i try not to be vindictive ha..

thank you marge...i didnt see you sneak in haa..good to hear from you ...hugss..

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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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Canada

11 posted 2002-02-19 02:10 PM

*sigh* you paint gentle emotions with the fine paint brush of your words..this poem is so incredibly tender and beautiful with a yearning quality to it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22

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IN

12 posted 2002-02-19 02:51 PM

Some very beautifully painted images within the folds of bittersweetness...very nicely written!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

13 posted 2002-02-19 03:01 PM

as velvet petals bled upon my heart
Oh, how I love this poem!! Awesome. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Victoria

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Posts 5869

14 posted 2002-02-19 05:00 PM

karen..oh thank you so much..you are too kind hon..hugss

dulcie..thank you for peeking in..nice to hear from you as always hugs

chris..thank you and im glad you enjoyed hugs

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

15 posted 2002-02-19 06:40 PM

Hello Victoria

So much beauty in your words and also so much sadness. This was very heartfelt.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Victoria

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Posts 5869

16 posted 2002-02-19 07:52 PM

Im glad you enjoyed Sue..i wrote it last night about midnight ha..a little tired at the time..ha hugs

strbbux
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Posts 3859

17 posted 2002-02-19 08:48 PM

"entwined within a foolish dream
while the clown of fate was laughing
in the wings of "I told you so"
as velvet petals bled upon my heart" Victoria, these are wonderful lines. lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

brianbeaudry
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since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

18 posted 2002-02-19 08:53 PM

such pain can love bestow...such joy can it create...longing but wonderful poem !!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

19 posted 2002-02-19 09:13 PM

Victoria - glad I stopped by to read this. Sad and lovely at the same time;.

BC

Victoria

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20 posted 2002-02-20 12:06 PM

thank you floria..pleased you enjoyed ..hugss
always nice hearing from you

brian..thank you for your nice comments..

bill..thank you and im glad you enjoyed

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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21 posted 2002-02-20 06:21 AM

Vic, as always this is just so soft and lovely. Enjoyed this early morning. Hugs to you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

22 posted 2002-02-20 08:50 AM

thank you Donna..nice to hear from you...hope all is well

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

23 posted 2002-02-20 10:10 AM

enjoyed

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

24 posted 2002-02-20 11:28 AM

~V~

Stunning....I can imagen the long night, and the winds whisper....

HUGS

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

25 posted 2002-02-20 11:10 PM

thank you vandana and lauren so much for peeking in...pleased you both enjoyed

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