Open Poetry #19 |
See You Again |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I want you I need you I love you Miss you more When you are not here Each day passes by, Want even you more Want to see you again, Pouring rain, I just love you Don't you know? It hurts me Not to see you again When you don't come to me I cry at night I try to feel the pain, Tonight, Iam alone, I just thinking about you See you again It Iseven harder for mw When I don't see you again, Don't know why? But It hurts me Because there Is a deep feeling Inside of my heart that can't hide away, See you again |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
A very yearning poem Vandana and a very nice one. I loved it. floria Floria |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Yes, yearning is the word. Great write there, my friend! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Vandana, this is so sad yet so beautiful, I hope you have true love close to your heart now and that you'll always see your love again through each brand new day! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-20-2002 01:36 PM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes my friend. . . you speak the words that we long to say. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
It is hard when the heart yearns for that special someone, the one that makes breathing seem easy, and when their not around the heart just aches. Nice write. Fee Expressions, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is easy to know why we love someone, and wrenching when we cannot be with them...you've said that very well in this poem, Vandana... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh yes, i know how this feels! enjoyed my friend |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this just aches! Very well spoken...I know this feeling well. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This aches with loneliness and longing... well done! *S* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yearning for your special one....beautiful translated emotions from your heart. (((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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