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My Existence..........
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My Existence.......... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Words are created in flow of soul’s reverence rushing forth with need with greed, no temperance heart will not be still offer no silence emotions rule every nuance ~ all that I am ~ my very essence having little patience to that which does not give balance to rhythm, rhyme to inner cadence allowing me no distance space or time guidance comes only from brilliance of sun, (in light of moon) as my ocean’s tides turn I admit, you are, my existence…….. ~SEA~ with all that you are... with all that you know... love...... [This message has been edited by SEA (02-16-2002 09:41 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, your gorgeous words are always such a pleasure and delight to readf, sweet friend, your heart always overflows with a love so pure and enchants us all with smiles! (kiss on cheek) May the words of his heart forever cradle you on the waves of joy, sweet friend, we all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this poem is alive with rhythm, spirit, soul and love and flows down the page like forever has taken hold of now..... wow!!! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Susan, you write with a flow of pure honey. This is too wonderful for words. ((Susan)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
what a glow of words and their essence comes through hear, a pleasant read! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my very essence having little patience to that which does not give balance to rhythm, rhyme to inner cadence allowing me no distance space or time guidance comes only from brilliance of sun, (in light of moon) as my ocean's tides turn I admit, you are, my existence ====================================== oh I love this one....could be read so many ways...as written to a love, or thy muse, or to poetry itself, or to the ocean you adore so...even the rain you crave....very very cool poem of self discovery. keeping this one for me moth collection  "Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, How do you do it? How do you keep getting better and better? I promise I won't tell  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Can I send this to someone? I love this! For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....EXQUISITE.... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You get a WOW, Susan. Just beautiful! (((hugs)))me Michael Auguste~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Susan, your essence is one of the beautiful things in this world.....the poem is beautiful and matches you very well |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
My goodness, this is absolutely beautiful! Beyond wonderful! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the rhythm and flow, as if a gentle tide pulled me through the poem. Beautifully done! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
hey Sandra this was fabulous to read , as you can see by the URL below http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/4450/P5.htm I often get my inspiration walking by the sea , seems we were both drawn by the same picture Hope |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lovely touch ms SEA..I enjoyed it |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Sea - You could not live without poetry, nor could poetry live without you. Very good. Dave |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
There is a feeling of completeness to this, that is amazing, Susan. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow this is great writing susan! I wish I could pen something like this |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan--Beautiful in every way! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*BUMP* |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I really enjoyed this - I'm glad it got bumped back up. I loved how the picture ties in with the poem. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Gorgeous!! (((hugs)))me Stars will shine when I am gone |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, you all say the nicest things. thank you!! and Larry thank you for da bump |
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