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Dance With Me |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“DANCE WITH ME” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Your hand taken in mine, to dance, tonight’s an evening of romance… Listen, and you will hear heart beats, one mine, one yours, two that greets… Tender skin I touch, closer to warm, your hair silk, hips move to conform… Thoughts of you, passion the mood, something here, which we have brewed… Lips moist to taste, dreamy eyes close, then opens to speak, as love flows… I’ll hold you tight, dance with me, you’ll not forget, this night to be… ~~~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey Bill, don't dance too far without me.  Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your loving heart always has so much love and compassion to give! (smiles) She is so very lucky, sweet friend, may you forever dance with her in eternal loves joy! We all love you so so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heartl, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
hips move to conform… Thoughts of you, passion the mood, I liked the way you moved me with your words. Very nice dance you do BC~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sounds like Heaven Bill~ Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'd like this night to order BC. . .hold the ketchup. . .  great job. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
What a dance!! Beautifully done... Kat |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm, very slow, soft and sensual dance here Bill. Sure, I'll dance with you anytime...especially in the rain. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely done..keep dancing bill... ~Victoria~ "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
A night to remember... Beautiful. "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I'll have dinner ready at 7 PM, Bill.... this is tempting...but my husband would be very jealous, so I think we'd better not LOL! But I seriously really enjoyed the poem!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
No she would not forget that romantic night Bill. Not at all. floria Floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Another one of your typically well crafted romantic pieces...Nice BC.. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy OH MY! Such an outstanding and wonderful piece of writing, I’ve read fabulous pieces from you before this is simply stunning. Truly you’ve outdone yourself darling boy . This simply flows with the music of it all, it’s sooooooooo beautiful in it’s language usage. Excellent writing from you Bill absolutely excellent   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* only if you lead and hold me really close...I want to listen to the beat of your heart as it plays with the music that moves your soul....*sigh* romantic and absolutely perfect...I love it...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
The Dance of romance...... beautiful |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* love this dance, soo romantic and full of love.....love it! Charisma |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - Good one for sure. Let's kick up our heels and go cut a rug as they say. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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