Open Poetry #19 |
Something Lost |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“SOMETHING LOST” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Night comes, darkness falls, I’m closer, yet feel alone… I remember when together, meant passions were shown… Now something seems missing, can’t quite put my finger on it… The excitement perhaps gone, seems to be leaving, bit by bit… It does creep up slowly on one, little by little the flame dies… If only both could see the change, then we wouldn’t, have to agonize… Don’t really know once it starts, if there’s a way to make it stop… This something lost inside me, splashing my heart, like a raindrop… ~~~~ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Very lonely write, my friend. But with rain showers come beautiful flowers... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This something lost inside me, splashing my heart, like a raindrop… Bill, this is a very heartfelt write. I enjoyed although sadly. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Bill, this is so very sad, my heart goes ou to you and I hope everything is OK, for I can't help but cry thinking about you when you write like this because you are such a loving friend and you deserve all the greatest happiness! (sigh) I would be very happy to e-mail you always and talk to you, sweet friend, I think we can both share how we feel and reach out to one another, I love you dearest friend! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
In two ways this touches me. Because it's reflecting life....and because it's reflecting this home. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
That void it's hard to fill, great reflection. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"splashing my heart, like a raindrop…" Hmmmm, Very very nice Bill. good work. floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I think once it starts to go this way, it's over. And I wish it were not so, but it seems to be. Well done, my friend. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes that little tinge of a raindrop sometimes stays with us like a never ending storm...but the sun will touch your heart again...i am sure..:sun: ~Victoria |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've felt that something lost too, but lost things get replaced everntually |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Bill hi there again, this is another very well written and descriptive piece of writing. You have written this very well, it is just like that, if you’re not careful bits of you slip away in the night, until all you have left is a ghost of memory. Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is simply outstanding writing, you have done so well here I don’t know how you do it. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. YOU always write brilliantly and today is no exception. Bits of your soul slipping into the night Yes Krissy I’m stealing your line This is an exceptional poem Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
closer yet feeling alone..sighing Bill someday..it has to change someday...for both of us. hugs written as only you know how..*s M |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
much to sad.... very good write.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A true to life write and a darn good one! Enjoyed. ~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~ |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Bill, My heart goes out to you.This could stay awhile, but my hope is with the warmth and sunshine that abounds from within you will dry this rain and bring you a meadow of flowers. Peaches |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful penned....touched my heart deeply, so a keeper to me. (((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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