assorted thoughts (5,000th post and more rare experimentation from me)

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-02-20 12:46 PM

good morning Sunshine
withered petals await light
lifting their head now

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
secret Valentine
adoring from far away
blushing in secret

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
with this pen I write
sending you a secret kiss
wrapped in napkin folds

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
dreaming without you
crying before closing eyes
wanting your voice now

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

[This message has been edited by Temptress (02-20-2002 12:47 AM).]

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-02-20 12:49 PM

Congratulations! Very cool experimentation!

Alicat
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since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

2 posted 2002-02-20 12:49 PM

Congratulations on 5K, oh Tempting One. And given the amount of difficulty you had with this format, I think you did very well.

Your friend in the desert,

Alicat

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2002-02-20 01:01 AM

Well now
Congrats on 5K
and what a way to show it off! Just excellent Jenn, and really different for you, so even better! Big hugs to you sweetie.

Live today like it was your last day on earth!
~* I don't know who said it but they were sure right *~

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

4 posted 2002-02-20 02:24 AM

Yeah, so I couldn't sleep.  What's new.

__________________________________________

Kudos on 5k!  Did you know I used to run the 5k?  It wasn't much fun, just time consuming, y'know.

You have no idea how surprised I was to see the extent of the experimentation you put into this piece. LOL  Truly truly amazing seeing it with your name attached. *grins*  Keep up the awesome work!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-20 08:31 AM

(smiles) YAY!!! Awwwwww, don't cry, your sunshine is on his way and he will forever suprise you with true happiness! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) CONGRATULATIONS, SWEET FRIEND, THIS IS SOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT, WE'RE ALL SO PROUD OF YOU, OUR NEW DEAREST MEMBER ASCENDANT!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-02-20 09:56 AM

Congratulations and well done !! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

7 posted 2002-02-20 10:08 AM

Congratulations! Your stuff is really cool!
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-02-20 10:14 AM

congs on your 5000th post

enjoyed

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-02-20 11:07 AM

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 5000th POST!!
Well done and may there be many thousands more!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (02-20-2002 11:09 AM).]

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-02-20 12:11 PM

A BIG CONGRATULATIONS TEMPTRESS, I ALWAYS ENJOY READING YOUR POETRY AND THIS ONE IS GREAT. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2002-02-20 04:00 PM

congratulations my friend. . .

these are excellent. . . your work with this form has brought forth wonderful results. . . keep working with it. . . you can only get better. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-02-20 04:08 PM

Jenn, congratulations on 5000!!!!
I like this experiment, it suits you.
Write on.
Sandra

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2002-02-20 04:42 PM

Jenn~

very lovely...and big CONGRATS on 5000 WOW oh WOW....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Fee
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since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

14 posted 2002-02-20 04:47 PM

"dreaming without you
crying before closing eyes
wanting your voice now"

So beautifully written, like so much of your work, your words go straight to my heart.

Temptress, thank you for enriching my life and congratulations on 5K.... Wow

Hugs and extra Hugs, your friend

Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

15 posted 2002-02-20 06:00 PM

Congrats! And I like it.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

16 posted 2002-02-20 08:11 PM

Hey Jen,

I love the new pic! 5000 posts, WOW!
Congrats to you sweetie! You introduced me to this wonderful place and now I'm hooked on it

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

17 posted 2002-02-20 08:27 PM

Touched your thoughts with my own...

Lingered...

Hummed a soft tune...

Yes...

what a world we share.

jwesley

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

18 posted 2002-02-20 11:19 PM

Jenn,

WOW 5,000!!!

I like your expirement. Here's to another 5,000!

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

19 posted 2002-02-20 11:27 PM

Very original. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us with some fine poetry.

Dave

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

20 posted 2002-02-20 11:36 PM

A BIG CONGRATULATIONS, my dear friend.

5000! WOW! *hugs*

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Jeffrey E. Osborne
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since 2001-11-01

Posts 160
out there

21 posted 2002-02-21 12:19 PM

You go girlfriend! (lol) Congrats, kudos, bravos and much rejoicing, my tempting friend

I'm looking forward to 5000 more of your posts, Jenn.
Big hug and a noisy wet "mmmwaahh"

- Jeff

And if this is only "experimentation", then you definitely need to do more of it!

Very well done, I especially like the stanza about secret kisses and napkins - beautiful imagery.

"people say I should learn some self-control, but I just want to exorcise my soul"

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

22 posted 2002-02-21 01:49 AM

Keep em coming Temptress...James

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

23 posted 2002-02-22 12:27 PM

Jenn-
Congratulation on reaching 5000!
I really enjoyed these thoughts.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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