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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 With day dawning Stretch and yawning sky reflects in puddle view I step outside, greet the rain Relish morning new Clouds dark With slow releasing Soul soothing Heart appeasing Water sounds cozy call Snuggle in Watch them fall Sleepy smile Stays in place Joy inside Shown on face Pleasure found in skies of grey linger long sweet rainy day ~SEA~ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Absolute perfection!! I love the picture!! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I've always enjoyed both sleeping and waking to the sound of rain. This picture looks remarkably like the skies just after a tornado has passed by and the sky is beginning to clear in my area of the country. The rain and hail would be so loud that if a tornado was on top of you, you would never be able to hear it. I enjoyed much, my friend. (((hugs)))  Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, there will always be a silver lining among every gray patch of sky and may on evetry rainy day and Monday love come to her and comfort her forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is terrific, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks for sending the rain, dear...we needed it so much.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly dreamy a fabulous little write with layers of meaning again. YOUR writing lately is superb darling girl just superb I love the depth of this the shades of it’s meanings, truly wonderful writing and (((((((Hug’s))))))))) Wonderful rain write Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Sea, did I love this and THAT picture, you know I love my picture poetry, excellent! Live today like it was your last day on earth! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, This is just perfect. The words, the picture.. you are SO good at this Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Clouds dark With slow releasing Soul soothing Heart appeasing You've such a unique style SEA~ I absolutely loved the sound of this. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you, each of you, very much the picture is one found on line, and it is exactly what a perfect day for me looks like I love this picture I love the rain....again, thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You 'rain' all over the page ... drenching us in the beauty of your thoughts~ Love it, gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this Sea...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it a lot |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
From one rain lover to another, I loved this poem and the haunting picture. floria Floria |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is very good Sea I love the rhyme and the cadence is perfect I like rain |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you Susan. What a wonderful way to awaken, this morning. ((Susan)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Listen to the rhythm of the falling rain..." I love it - I'm smiling... in the rain.. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What Nan said and ... Gee yore good, gal Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- I absolutely LOVE this! I LOVE the rain, and now you've got me wishing for a rainy day.. AND...Nan stole my song! LOL! One of my all-time favorites. Again...I love this!  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan, hello m'friend. ive missed you and your work greatly! i have never heard of a rainy day described quite so beautifully as you have here. this was such an excellent piece of writing, but then again...i've come to expect no less from you. take care. wonderful to read you again! amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have managed to turn a rainy day into sunshine and flowers...beautiful... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it would appear that the storm is coming in. . . pefectly done SEA. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wanna exchange.....Got plenty of rainy days here, wishing for more sun |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful. |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
If all poetry could be so refined and simple, yet tingle the eyes like this....*smile* You are but a beautiful reflection of the mapping of day, Sea. PB4S |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I'm ready for one of those! *BUMP* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Aw Susan, this is awesome! I love storms! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
how timely....it's supposed to rain today for me, I'm looking out at a foggy mountain morning right now thank you all so much |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan, beautiful writing hon! you have some amazingly wonderful imagery weaved into this...just a lovely poem! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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