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The Venus Touch
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The Venus Touch |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Venus Touch The Venus touch is odd indeed A mystery of our human need An extra sense that does compel A factor with the weirdest spell It shows itself in giddiness. In awkwardness and weird finesse It makes us wink and blink and think Until our faces turn to pink It twists us into spider’s lace With weavings showing little grace And tangles us within a course That sometimes looks like Spanish moss. And I admit that ladies vie And hem and haw and surely sigh. They flutter like a rapid fan And fawn upon that graceless man. And on some residue of true You fall in the abyss of you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
An extra sense that does compel A factor with the weirdest spell It shows itself in giddiness. In awkwardness and weird finesse ====================================== It twists us into spider's lace With weavings showing little grace ======================================= And I admit that ladies vie And hem and haw and surely sigh. They flutter like a rapid fan And fawn upon that graceless man. And on some residue of true You fall in the abyss of you. ==================================== NOT ME!! I only flutter and fawn for Randy  *L*very cool poem of rhymes on time me Winkie-love. I've heard women throw themselves at the feet of poets, LOL *winkiewinkie*  "Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And on some residue of true I fell in the abyss for you. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling man as always an excellent poem. Wonderful utterly utterly wonderful. Do you ever have an off day?  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mushy, Not if I can help it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Upon your thoughts I am borne to soar into the early morn With such creative internal rhyme I think this poem is mighty fine~ You still rock me poet~  Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And you are my platform of launch. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo enchantingly gorgeous, sweet friend, I too know this feeling so much, for I have fallen in love with my dream girl Joanna and she makes me feel as though I am caught in heavens web! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
oh yes the venus touch...i thought you were talking about my venus razor ha.. enjoyed Sy~Vic |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Noah, Thank you my friend. Victoria, Ha Ha Thank you. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is too true, isn't it. And it affects women and men equally. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* and so magical and mystical is the venus touch that we are lost willingly within it...Lovely...I love it..**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Yes it is, thank you. Startime, Thank you and hugs back. |
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