Sunset (Idea taken from Marge)

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Open Poetry #19

Sunset (Idea taken from Marge)

jennirey
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since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

0 posted 2002-02-18 10:35 PM

A sunset is just a puff of smoke.
It is there one minute and gone the next.
In that moment is a glorious sight.
Like Heaven on Earth, But never the less.
It is not Heaven.....
Just an illusion of that one day when
God Himself will walk the Earth again.....

(My First poem ever, Written in 1983.)

Jen

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-02-18 10:38 PM

Jenn,
Cool! Wish I had my first poem. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing it.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-18 10:41 PM

YAY!!! THIS WONDERFUL POEM SHOWS THAT YOU HAVE BEEN A TALENTED POET ALL ALONG, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-02-18 11:26 PM

Jennirey~
What a lovely piece of writing~
I'm appreciative that something I was inspired to write would also inspire another to post her work~

Thank you for sharing this beauty~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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