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Open Poetry #19

A Woman I Adore

poeticdreamer
Junior Member

since 2002-01-17

Posts 46

0 posted 2002-02-18 09:44 PM

A woman I adore:

Soft petal lips of rose smothering me,

Oh, if I had to go now this would be the way,

Passing on to paradise with heaven embracing me,

Wisps of silken hair that tingles my face,

Scent of once dreamed angel allowing me to breathe,

Eyes that whisper nothing yet everything,

Surrendering to love wrapped around my body,

Carried far beyond fondest hopes never wished of,

Making me believe in things I didn't know existed,

Here to stay now forever in my living conscious reality.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-18 09:58 PM

"Making me believe in things I didn't know existed,"

love it when that happens, cause it doesn't happen very often

I like this very much

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-02-18 09:59 PM

*sigh* sounds like you found the lady of your dreams...she is a lucky lady to have your adoration....Well said and very passionately romantic...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-02-18 10:09 PM

Now that is a beautiful romantic poem, and the woman you adore will undoubtedly treasure it forever.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-18 10:22 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may she forever make you believe in the joys of life and give you true loves happiness! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-02-18 10:40 PM

Poetic Dreamer...This is a DREAM of a poem. Lovely echoes of love filtering down throughout each word. ***Ivy Rose

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