Open Poetry #19 |
Miss Daisy |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A pen he finally built for her So I could bring her home Letting her out into the yard With plenty of room to run Running as fast as she could go She jumped right over the fence I chased her for several hours Trying to get her to come home For about three hours I chased her Around eighty acres of pasture Down into the canyon she went As I followed right behind her Trying to get her to come out While feeding her some carrots Backing up a little each time As I fed her some more carrots I finally get her out of the canyon Heading straight to my in-laws Running right into their cattle pen I quickly ran to shut the gate Now I have her back home again I feed her apples and carrots She’ll them right from my hand Still she won’t let me touch her By Sue 2-17-o2 [This message has been edited by SmartChick (02-18-2002 10:50 PM).] |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Ah, isn't wildlife a joy? sky |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'll keep working to get the picture to show!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Miss Daisy sounds like a very spirited horse. Or is she a very spirited cow?LOL, hope you can get that photo loaded so I can see Miss Daisy. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-18-2002 12:19 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Touching poem! I do believe that there is a verb missing at the end of the poem..she'll "take" them right from my hand? surprised no one mentioned that!Is this a llama you have? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I love animal poems! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for the comments about my llama poem. She is my pet. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Your llama? I have never known one, is she a sweet pet? Enjoyed. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...I love llamas so much, right next to my grandparent's house in Cape Giradeau, Missouri, their neighbor Clarence has a petting farm and I am so fortunate and lucky to see the llamas and horses every summer! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo cute, sweet friend, we all love you so much, hooray for Miss Daisy and you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmartChick~ Ahhhhh ... a beauty for sure~ So glad I got to 'see' her~ And ... I got the picture to show by clicking on the edit icon and then back to the poem~ Love you gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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