Open Poetry #19 |
Bounce |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Bounce I am but a bouncing ball when you drop me yes I fall but after the jolt of descend I shall bounce back up again "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Applauds...you go girl!!!! Love this one |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - and you will bounce back up again. Peace be with you my friend... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Helen, what a delightful comeback. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You are absolutely right. I'm glad this was not an ode to a fabric softener Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Lady, this is so nice, so creative, love it. floria Floria |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Yes! Yes, you shall! Go girl! Go!!!! ((hugs)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
1slick_lady- Yes! I love this! Very creative metaphor, my friend. Happy Valentine's Day to you.. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, yes, yes, you are a superball, and you will always rise again with love and laughter, for you deserve true happiness so very much and you are a delight to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
excuse me...*bump* |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
My Fair Lady, I loved this one b/c it just seems so serious, but you can't help but feel playful reading it...You know? LOL J~! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well said! Excellent and relatable use of a metaphor. I love your writing style. *ahem* and when can I buy your book of published poetry Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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