Open Poetry #19 |
Hey Jesus... |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Hey Jesus By: Noah Eaton 2/18/02 Hey Jesus... It's me, one of your Singing Sparrows I come to you to ask for guidance I'm sorry if I have failed to notice you before I'm sorry if I have stumbled among the black sheep Please forgive me if I have ever caused you trouble Hey Jesus... Are you available today? I apologize if I have interrupted you But I need you so badly I have been lying here underneath this acacia tree It seems like Groundhog Day is an antithesis I anxiously wait for the spring to come to the southland I have been planting forget-me-nots for every broken heart In the scourings of my youth My throat is parched under the desert sun Will I ever find... Will I ever find my promisedland? Hey Jesus... It's just me I only wish I could talk to you more often before I could sure use a hug right now I could sure use a shoulder to cry over I could really use an adumbration I have been on the run for greener pastures I have been trying to hold off the undertow I have been trying to build a birdhouse of promise To harbor myself from the sorrow To find a sancturay of inner-peace Hey Jesus... I ask of you for a favor Will you be my savoir too? I come to you with your friendship I yearn to behold a coronation with my dreams All I ask for is for your guidance I just want to find a decent melody I just want to be with the girl I love Will you help me find my way to her So I can have someone to hold forever Someone to cuddle up with and dream with Someone to lie beside all my life So I can never again feel the coldness of my bed beside me So I can be convinced I belong I promise I will make up for what I've wasted I will always claim to believe in you and your Father I will always love you with all my heart I will always bleed for you... Hey Jesus... Can you hear me? Or will I have to wait until I die To schedule an appointment with you? [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-18-2002 06:11 PM).] |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is.......i cant even say... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Noah, He hears you, all you need to do is what you just did. Knock on His door and believe He enters, and He does, and He stays forever dear friend. This is now, my most favorite of all the poems you have written. I know He will answer. God bless dear friend. floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, Noah, this is so beautiful. And sad. I tell you what, you can always lean on my shoulder when you feel like no one is listening. Sandra |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Aw, Noah. I got a shoulder, too. And Jesus knows what you ask, even before you say it. And He just wants you to love God and show your love for others, as you have been doing. There is no magic. Just say ok, and thanks. There is nothing to promise! His Salvation is free. We all love you, sweet Noah. (((((Noah))))) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Noah. Excellent! I'm speechless... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Noah. Remember how many people care, and listen, every day. You are never alone. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Noah, he is always there waiting for you. He knows what's in your heart. We all love you Noah. I, too, have a shoulder you can cry on.
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Noah... You Sweetie... You know He is always there listening ... and caring, never needing a promise from you only the faith that He is there. "the mountains my crumble, the seas run dry, but the Word of God is Forever.... just as His love is for you and me. Love and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Noah...You never need an appointment to come to Jesus. All you need is FAITH. He hears you, Noah. The trouble is that we sometimes don't listen when He speaks. If you believe, you can ask anything in His name and you will receive it. ***Ivy Rose |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
I am crying Noah, Gosh those were sweet words... How sweet you offered them and have shown your inner soul to us on these pages. God Bless You Dear one, May you please find your way soon.. Jen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
He is listening hon..no appointment needed.. enjoyed noah...hugss ~Vic |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
He can definately hear you...I hope and pray that Jesus will take you in his arms and love you and care for you...James |
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Kathleen Junior Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 20Indiana |
Noah, never lose this faith. I've showed this to several people. This is a wonderful poem of faith and pure honesty, never lost it, be bold, speak it, live it, and you will always write wonderful, kind poetry, keep writing, Noah, keep being YOU, honest.. Kathleen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - this is one of the most heartfelt writings I have ever read. My word, this is beautiful in it's sadness of you. Noah, if you need to talk you know my email, and I'm on ICQ. Sometimes a friend can be of help... Peace Noah, Jesus does hear you... BC |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Noah, He's always with you...... I enjoyed this poem very much. ~Laura~ |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Noah; The Lord is always there waiting with open arms for us to come to Him in simple, childlike faith. If we are willing to acknowledge our need, He is more then willing to receive us. No appointment is necessary. Though millions may call on Him at once, He still hears; and each one of us is important to Him. God has revealed Himself to us through His Son, the revealed Word and through His written Word. To know Him, we need to get into the written Word. You know I care for you, and you do have my e mail address. I would be happy to chat more with you. You are loved by a great many people; surely all the responses are evidence of that love. Wanda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, this is lovely sweet poet. How could the Lord not be listening to one of His angels here on earth? hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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