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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-04-07 09:30 AM



Touch Me There


there is a special
kind of touching
that can jerk
a sleeping soul
awake
it is deep
within the giving
and gentle
in its take
it will shake
the world around you
as you stand
flat hearted
on the ground
and be the
sweetest music heard
after being deafened
by the echo
of no sound
it is the sound
of the heart beat
with the rhythm
that matches your own
and the touch
that you’re feeling
is knowing you belong
and you are home


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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1 posted 2002-04-07 10:13 AM


"as you stand
flat hearted
on the ground"

well done, h.

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2 posted 2002-04-07 11:55 AM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too believe it is heavenly to feel your loves heart beat against your own, and I always dream of feeling that for the first time! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-07 02:43 PM


This is absolutely beautiful Helen!
Hugs.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-04-07 03:16 PM


Yes it is nice when you feel comfortable with the one you are with...James
DonFurr
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5 posted 2002-04-07 09:52 PM


What a delight
Great write

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-04-07 10:02 PM


As always, excellent. ThisDiamond
Larry C
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7 posted 2002-04-08 01:20 AM


Sandra,
Can it be...that heart beating duet could be love? You have to know that I really liked this.

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