The Words of My Need--Sonnet

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Moonlight Romeo

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The heart of you

0 posted 2002-04-05 01:13 PM

I cannot find words that speak of my need.
The desire of my heart to love you.
For you are the one for which my soul pleads.
You are my moon in sky of Midnight Blue.
I sleep at night to your sweet whispered voice.
The words of your heart caressing my own.
To touch you in dreams, now, my only choice
Till our love will be, no longer, unknown.
Alone, my heart grieves at my condition;
And I send up a prayer to close the miles
That you will feel my love, warm like the sun,
As it touches your heart, and makes you smile.

One line remains, Dear One, for you to view.
This line, my heart, and these words, "I Love You."

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

[This message has been edited by Moonlight Romeo (04-05-2002 01:14 PM).]

passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-04-05 02:41 PM

very romantic, I liked it

Mistletoe Angel

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2 posted 2002-04-05 03:13 PM

"One line remains, Dear One, for you to view.
This line, my heart, and these words, "I Love You."

(smiles) Awwwwww, I just love the gorgeous couplet you ended this enchanting sonnet with, may she always be your blue moon of love and shine in the horizons of your heart with smiles forever! (sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet romeo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

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with you

3 posted 2002-04-05 07:48 PM

You brought tears to my eyes with this one

and now I thank you

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-04-05 09:27 PM

This is so lovely, and so how I feel.
Enjoyed your verse, as usual.
Sandra

strbbux
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5 posted 2002-04-05 09:29 PM

Romeo, this is a wonderful sonnet, and the last two lines that complete it are so well written, good choice of lines. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-04-05 09:43 PM

Oh Romeo, this is just too beautiful for words.
Magnificent, romantic and truly breathtaking.

Alwye

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In the space between moments

7 posted 2002-04-05 10:25 PM

*sigh* You have a very romantic pen.....gorgeous and heartfelt words, I truly enjoyed the read.

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

Siofra

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State of Suspended Passion

8 posted 2002-04-06 01:36 AM

This is the you I know. Sweet and simply overflowing with love. Your name suits you, Love.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-04-06 11:19 AM

Moonlight Romeo - meaningful words, great write...

BC

Ivy Rose
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10 posted 2002-04-07 12:47 PM

Moonlight Romeo...Tender ballad, gentle caress of the heart, in this old-fashioned romantic poem. LOVE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING!!!

***Ivy Rose

Moonlight Romeo

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The heart of you

11 posted 2002-04-08 01:43 PM

Thank you all my friends, this, I feel, is one of my best.

It is based on, and inspired by, Sarah McLachlan's "I Love You".

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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