Open Poetry #19 |
The Words of My Need--Sonnet |
Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I cannot find words that speak of my need. The desire of my heart to love you. For you are the one for which my soul pleads. You are my moon in sky of Midnight Blue. I sleep at night to your sweet whispered voice. The words of your heart caressing my own. To touch you in dreams, now, my only choice Till our love will be, no longer, unknown. Alone, my heart grieves at my condition; And I send up a prayer to close the miles That you will feel my love, warm like the sun, As it touches your heart, and makes you smile. One line remains, Dear One, for you to view. This line, my heart, and these words, "I Love You." What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. [This message has been edited by Moonlight Romeo (04-05-2002 01:14 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic, I liked it |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"One line remains, Dear One, for you to view. This line, my heart, and these words, "I Love You." (smiles) Awwwwww, I just love the gorgeous couplet you ended this enchanting sonnet with, may she always be your blue moon of love and shine in the horizons of your heart with smiles forever! (sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet romeo, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You brought tears to my eyes with this one and now I thank you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is so lovely, and so how I feel. Enjoyed your verse, as usual. Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Romeo, this is a wonderful sonnet, and the last two lines that complete it are so well written, good choice of lines. floria Floria |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Romeo, this is just too beautiful for words. Magnificent, romantic and truly breathtaking. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
*sigh* You have a very romantic pen.....gorgeous and heartfelt words, I truly enjoyed the read. *Krista Knutson* |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
This is the you I know. Sweet and simply overflowing with love. Your name suits you, Love. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Moonlight Romeo - meaningful words, great write... BC |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Moonlight Romeo...Tender ballad, gentle caress of the heart, in this old-fashioned romantic poem. LOVE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Thank you all my friends, this, I feel, is one of my best. It is based on, and inspired by, Sarah McLachlan's "I Love You". Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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