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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Miles between phantom kisses rise the warmth on cheeks where flutterings were the paths once left by shadows in the dark morning breaks peeks through laugh lines eyes seeking newness where yesterday ends and jealousy overtakes the night miles between dark and light time moves faster as sleep tries to hold on but dreams must awaken to tomorrow's prison and you M * first verse inspired by Helen's "Shiver"...the rest just followed as time changed... "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-07-2002 08:07 AM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
m...this is beautiful...and i am so proud i inspired you that i am beaming...this touches me...and in many ways today is a special day for me...i just found out i wasnt a moth after all...I AM A BUTTERFLY...and you have just made that discovery much happier...thanks...helen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well Helen then this day is made even more special..as your response has made me smile my first of the day...You have been a Butterfly all along...don't let anyone tell you different... *and you inspire me many other times...a word here and a word there..I always read you hugss and have a wonderful sleep if needed and a wonderful day/night to follow M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - your words are of dream thoughts, very precious... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice write  liked it |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo wonderful, sweet friend, Helen truly is a butterfly just as you are, and you are bound to fly forever, just always love and believe in your dreams! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
M, this is beautiful! lovely images you have here forever embedded into time! just a lovely write dear. take care. amy |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
morning breaks peeks through laugh lines eyes seeking newness where yesterday ends and jealousy overtakes the night I love your imagery here, Maureen.... its very special ~hugs full of laugh lines~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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