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Open Poetry #19

Reshaping the Journey

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

0 posted 2002-04-07 04:07 AM

wild ride
hands in the air
lettin' go
kinda like a
roll and stroll
taking off at a
slow steady pace
ahead, but not a race
and the chill accelerates
the speed, in a lifetime
there's really to few
precious hours....
no time to grieve
just gotta move,
full speed ahead
listen to the inner voice
not to be easily led
and sometimes when ya
wake-up in that strange bed
or with that aching head
know it was a chance you took
that's the reason you bled........Mark Coburn

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-04-07 07:24 AM

I never wake up in a strange bed but..
I agree:

there's really too few
precious hours....
no time to grieve
just gotta move,
full speed ahead
listen to the inner voice
not to be easily led...

*s
M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-07 12:17 PM

BRAVO!!! Yes, we all must always look ahead and trust where we are heading, for our own actions make all the difference in our journies! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-04-07 12:27 PM

This was exhilarating!!
Loved the determination in your poem.
So it's a wash, my head is aching this morning becuse I took the chance right!!
Girls just want to have fun you know!

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2002-04-07 10:12 PM

Yep, the journey of life. What a wonderful experience…in all it’s forms. And yes, I’ve had a few of those aching heads to testify to a good time the night before

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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