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Open Poetry #19

The Sky is Falling

Maverick Wolf
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 94
Scandia, MN

0 posted 2002-03-28 10:54 PM

The sky is falling
The world is ending
But it's alright

My world is free of your's
It will survive
And so will I

My sky is falling
My world is ending
But it's alright

My fantasy is free of any world
It will survive
And so will I

It's all melting
My fantasy is ending
But it's alright

All things must end
When all is gone
It is my time

[This message has been edited by Maverick Wolf (03-28-2002 11:10 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-03-28 11:33 PM

It will survivie
and so will I~ Yes!!

It's all relevant I think.
I liked your poem Maverick~

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-03-28 11:43 PM

I dont' know what to say to this; I really think it's great, but I just don't know what to say!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-28 11:47 PM

(sigh) I understand this feeling so very well, sweet friend, I too always feel when I'm in love the sky is falling and the world is changing but yet everything feels so right! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-03-29 12:26 PM

Yes, the sky is falling, but you found out you can catch it.

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

5 posted 2002-04-07 08:40 PM

I don't know what to THINK about this one, I like the writing itself, but the meaning is vague (obviously intentionally) so I can't really comment on the meaning I derive from it... being as self-absorbed as I am I can only imagine. Good write however, maybe someday I'll really understand what it means. Yes?

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