Open Poetry #19 |
Kissing A Rainbow |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“KISSING A RAINBOW” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Lying among the lilies soft, eyes closed, pondering mind… Hearing you saying thoughts, listening, I’m inclined… Sweet whispers, caring words, tender, as a morning rainbow… Across the sky after the rain, touching, charming the meadow… Many colors all these shades, caressing, all encompassing… Reminds me of your lips, always accompanying… Moistness of you to touch, loving you this way… Kissing a rainbow gently, the way I do, today… ~~~~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
aww bill, how pretty this is! I love the title too! whoever has your heart sure is lucky! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Many colors all these shades, caressing, all encompassing… Reminds me of your lips, always accompanying… That could make the day a bit brighter! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you and your love forever slide hand-in-hand down the rainbows of love and forever dream with joy forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy as always you write with such skill and beauty I really found this excellent poem wonderful. The gentle softness of a hearts whisper Well done darling heart, very very well done. This poem contains some amazingly beautiful lines, the flow is utterly utterly divine, I love it I truly do. Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The blooms of spring in your words here. What sweet caress. ThisDiamond |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ This is so soft, and so tender....thank you Lauren~ Step through the |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Bill when one's lips grace the color of paint palette sky spanning clouds, arching graceful born of a sigh its the thrill of a lifetime a kiss never old when a rainbow's your lover life's a found pot of gold. Great to have you back, Bill. Hope you are OK. ~concerned look~ Let your soul smile as often as possible. Jeff |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Rainbows are magical. They remind us that life goes on, and they can rekindle the dreams of our reflected multicolored souls. And you have now added another hue to the rainbow, with this beauty. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Hearing you saying thoughts, listening, I’m inclined… You're one of the few. Very romantic. Melton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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