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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-04-06 08:23 PM



“KISSING A RAINBOW”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Lying among the lilies soft,
eyes closed, pondering mind…
Hearing you saying thoughts,
listening, I’m inclined…

Sweet whispers, caring words,
tender, as a morning rainbow…
Across the sky after the rain,
touching, charming the meadow…

Many colors all these shades,
caressing, all encompassing…
Reminds me of your lips,
always accompanying…

Moistness of you to touch,
loving you this way…
Kissing a rainbow gently,
the way I do, today…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-04-06 08:27 PM


aww bill, how pretty this is! I love the title too!
whoever has your heart sure is lucky!

Duncan
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2 posted 2002-04-06 08:30 PM


Many colors all these shades,
caressing, all encompassing…
Reminds me of your lips,
always accompanying…

That could make the day a bit brighter!

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3 posted 2002-04-06 08:31 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you and your love forever slide hand-in-hand down the rainbows of love and forever dream with joy forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-04-06 08:37 PM


Bill darling boy as always you write with such skill and beauty I really found this excellent poem wonderful. The gentle softness of a hearts whisper Well done darling heart, very very well done. This poem contains some amazingly beautiful lines, the flow is utterly utterly divine, I love it I truly do.

Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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5 posted 2002-04-06 09:11 PM


The blooms of spring in your words here. What sweet caress. ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-04-06 10:10 PM


Bill~

This is so soft, and so tender....thank you


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

ShadowRider
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7 posted 2002-04-06 10:28 PM


Bill

when one's lips grace the color
of paint palette sky
spanning clouds, arching graceful
born of a sigh

its the thrill of a lifetime
a kiss never old
when a rainbow's your lover

life's a found pot of gold.

Great to have you back, Bill.
Hope you are OK.  ~concerned look~
Let your soul smile as often as possible.
Jeff

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8 posted 2002-04-07 01:33 AM


Rainbows are magical. They remind us that life goes on, and they can rekindle the dreams of our reflected multicolored souls. And you have now added another hue to the rainbow, with this beauty.
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9 posted 2002-04-07 07:32 AM


Hearing you saying thoughts,
listening, I’m inclined…


You're one of the few. Very romantic.


Melton

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10 posted 2002-04-07 10:15 AM


enjoyed
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