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Saturday Morning Me
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Saturday Morning Me |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Saturday Morning Me It's just me... sitting in the dark surrounded by you-thoughts on a Saturday morning. I wonder if you know the affection I hold and the effection of caring that can turn my world upside down or rightside up. You say I should please myself, feel my own worth, strengthen my resolve, and motivate from within. Today I am on the upside, eight hours of internal peace. A smile replacing the frown of despair. Even if only for today, I will meditate its wonder, rejoice in its calmness and throw a kiss to the one who mirrors me. I won't rest until the some day comes when I can thank you for reaching into my heart, gifting me with loving thoughts that repair the injure, soothe the aches, charm my fears and lend me a togetherness, remaining a friend in sunshine and shade. Perhaps tonight, I will travel once again in dreams of you, and though my voice is silent still, my whispered thoughts may be heard across the miles to enter yours...to share the times past, walking hand in hand, the touch of yours upon my shoulder, my short to your tall, and on the edge of it all, I will see your eyes, blue as they are, matching the sky as I look up and lead you with my smile. ~M~ "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Tis wonderfully calming to sit in thought of those that have inspired I can relate Hope |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart this is utterly utterly fabulous writing. Inspiration whoever it flows from is a wonderful gift this site abounds in. I certainly can say that there are those who inspire me. Big smile Stunning piece of writing from you, utterly outstanding. Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful. Excellent may your pen never run dry of inspirations ink   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, There was a frenchmen who said "every day in every way you get better and better." and it's true. Wonderful write. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - good morning Saturday morning you... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What is so perfect about this piece, is that it might fit any friend...and that is what makes it universal... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Hope..and over the years, many have inspired me, including your words *s Maureen |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
my whispered thoughts may be heard across the miles to enter yours...to share the times past, walking hand in hand, the touch of yours upon my shoulder, my short to your tall, and on the edge of it all, Loved this one, Maureen......thanks for sharing it. ~dreamy hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely thoughts for a saturday morn Maureen..as i sit here still in my robe and a wet head haa..at 11:15..hugs ~Victoria
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Maureen, I got such a peacefull feeling reading this. How wonderful to have a friend like that. And you sound like you are truly in a peacefull and great mood. I love it. It is such a warm poem. and I like your new pic. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I will see your eyes, blue as they are, matching the sky as I look up and lead you with my smile."  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautifully upbeat, sweet friend, may everyday to you be a Saturday and fill you with calm, peaceful thoughts of love and reassurance of hope always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-06-2002 01:17 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Maureen, this has such a gentle and glowingly warm tone to it. I really enjoyed this friendship conversation, with you softly speaking your thoughts to willing ears. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Marsha..you have inspired me many times in my writings....a little phrase here an important one there I appreciate your comments and friendship hugsss M Sy, I always wondered where that phrase came from ..Vous n'êtes pas français, n'est-ce pas ? Merci, toujours M BC...now it is a Good Sunday Morning to you *s...sorry, yesterday did not turn out to be as nice as I thought for me. hugss M Sunshine..I always have a direction for my words and thoughts in poetry and I am always happy if it fits anothers feelings.Thank you Karilea. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
my whispered thoughts may be heard across the miles With the strong emotion you have penned, I'm sure he will hear you. Thanks, Melton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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