Open Poetry #19 |
His Pen (A Dedication to a Passionate Poet) |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
When an amiable heart takes pen in hand beating inner drums signifying longer journeys (other paths), love and souls collide beneath canopies of magic where whisper remnants frolic. When the quill of kindness raps irresistibly on pleasantly surprised pages (stationary blue) (or any stationary for that matter) there is passion in such a sound. Listen now for the soft scratching of a poet's favorite instrument (which makes its own kind of music) His ink is often "dipped thought" A sweetness drawn from where mischievous muses seek inexhaustible freedom to abide by their unquenchable whims. Their whims fuel for gentle hands painting inspiration colored thoughts. I can see him (cantyouseehim?) slave to all mischief slave to all grave pondering Man Passion wrapped artist's soul lover's heart. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This one is dedicated to our one and only Sven Pen. Thanks for the inspiration all of your work provides me, John. No one right now is more deserving of this dedication than you..and it only covers the surface. There is so much more.. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Temptress,...this is amazing, and I do see, I do. *Peace. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A very moving and lovely tribute... "dipped thoughts"...wonderful description, Jenn *s Maureen |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Listen now for the soft scratching of a poet's favorite instrument (which makes its own kind of music) His ink is often "dipped thought" Perfect! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a gorgeous tribute to a very deserving friend to us all, sweet friend, I just know he will always love this as his words delight us all everyday as yours do! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfect Jenn! And Sven is very deserving of this wonderful piece! Hugs. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Temptress, He'll love it, enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Tempress - this is a most beautify dedication to a master poet. One I proudly call my friend... BC |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Jenn~ So deserving and then some....beautiful both from poet, to poet.... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Jenn, I can see him (cantyouseehim?) slave to all mischief slave to all grave pondering Man Passion wrapped artist's soul lover's heart. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I really, really liked this. Well done. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A wonderful dedication! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
yes, I love reading my friiend's sven poetry He's one of my favorite poet at passions nice |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jenn darling girl this is utterly wonderful I the flow it is utterly utterly perfect. As always darling girl your writing shines. Truly this is one of your utter best. But then it’s written for such a fine poet, absolutely excellent. Sven may I take the opportunity to say YOUR writing is superb, and we love you AD Beautifully written and I love it. Perfect poetry Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
somehow Jennifer, "Thank you" just doesn't seem enough. . . but, it's all that I can say right now . . . I'm honored to be an inspiration of yours. . . just as your work provides me with inspiration as well. . . thank you again. . . it's nice to have friends like you. . . and, to all of you that replied. . . thank you as well. . . you're all wonderful people. . . and I'm glad to have you in my life. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (04-08-2002 03:18 PM).] |
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Jeffrey E. Osborne Member
since 2001-11-01
Posts 160out there |
A fitting tribute to a talented poet and a wonderful friend. Well done Jenn! (removes his hat and bows to Sven) - Jeff |
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