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dgvarner
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0 posted 2002-04-06 12:19 PM



awkward beginnings--
wondering what,
if,
how is it that this thing stirs
within me...

and now that
we
have become us
i wonder what i missed
by not having noticed
sooner...

i watch your face
as we make love in the light of morn
your eyes as gentle pools
of gray-blue sea
i smile--
thinking of all the ways
you already tell me
     you love me...
if you could not speak
if i could not hear
your kiss would breathe your truth
into me--
i would know...

everything that is you
have i looked for...

i've traveled storms
of wrong decisions
and met the calm
of sweet release
and here
here is where i find you...
you came to me
when i least expected--
when my search had stilled
you touched me
...and this involuntary smile
has yet to be erased...

who knew--
     it was you...

-dgvarner
4-1-02
kdr


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Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-04-06 12:25 PM


if you could not speak
if i could not hear
your kiss would breathe your truth
into me--

Filled with an aura of romance....
very beautiful, DV

~lots of hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Duncan
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2 posted 2002-04-06 12:34 PM


To beginnings...especially awkward ones!
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-04-06 12:45 PM


darnnnn...your kiss would breathe your truth
into me--
How I love that line....

everyone keeps telling me that it will come  when least expected...I am still waiting *s

M

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-04-06 01:20 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this poem radiates with your afterglow of joy in love, sweet friend, may this smile forever be worn on your face and never be erased in your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Charisma
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5 posted 2002-04-06 02:50 PM


beautiful....beautiful penned!!

Charisma

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-04-06 03:00 PM


dgvarner,
You could not have said it better. Enjoyed

dgvarner
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7 posted 2002-04-09 12:56 PM


MADAME..thank you for 'beautiful'  
DUNCAN..the awkward ones are the most interesting...lol  thanks friend..
NAKDTHOUGHTS..lol..glad you liked that line!  and yes--when you LEAST expect it....it will be...you just wait and see..when its right, you'll know....  
NOAH..thank you much..
CHARISMA..thank you!
SEYMOUR..so glad you enjoyed..thank you..

hugs, g

"life is what happens while youre making other plans..."  

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (04-09-2002 12:57 PM).]

Dee
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8 posted 2002-04-09 06:20 PM


dg, such touching words filled with longing. You have a wonderful way with them.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-04-10 12:24 PM


DG~

'and here
here is where i find you...
you came to me
when i least expected--


Well ... I'm also living proof it happens !!!!

Beautiful write poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

dgvarner
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10 posted 2002-04-10 06:52 AM


DEE..thank you..glad to have you read me
MARGE..yes you are living proof of such!  and i've enjoyed watching you waltz around in the arms of love.....   ..thanks for reading!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is what happens while we're making other plans..."  ;)

EagleOne
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11 posted 2002-04-10 07:07 AM


So this is where you've been hiding ....This rate amongst your best my friend, take care!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

dgvarner
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12 posted 2002-04-11 09:51 PM


eddie...!!  and where have YOU been hiding my good friend...??  

thank you thank you..glad you enjoyed it!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is what happens while we're making other plans..."  ;)

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