Open Poetry #19 |
The Dancers |
strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
The Dancers In the center of our praise the dancers lie, Exhausted yet fulfilled from their dance gone by. The power of the audience has had their say. Now mounts the excitement to perform another day. The shoes are polished off and set aside. The frilly dresses hung undignified. And cream is layed upon the made up face, Until there is not left a tiny trace. Then with the beginning of a brand new day. They awake to practice there's no time for play. With deep determination they rise and dress. A great need for acceptance is what they possess. Now mounts the excitement to perform another day. The power of the audience has had their say. Exhausted yet fulfilled from their dance gone by. In the center of our praise the dancers lie. Floria Kelderhouse [This message has been edited by strbbux (04-06-2002 01:23 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like how you let me "see" back stage and the afterglow of the performance....the anticipation of the next wonderful!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You bring back a memory from when I was very, very young...no, younger...someday I must upload the photo and send it to you and in doing so...you will know... thank you for this Floria...it is a Keeper... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, A beautiful sight a wonderful write. Thank you. |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Enjoyed this. Nice portrait of the concerted efforts of a dance or performance...dancers need their audience! "I think I go home." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Floria...Your imagery is so vivid, that I could just see those dancers relaxing in the audience's praise, after the show. Very lovely ~dancing hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
aren't we all performers in a way? I use to take ballet as a child..I performed as a Moonbeam and Poison Ivy...kind of funny when I think of those two personalities and how I am today..*s Nicely written hugss M |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sea thank you, I wrote this after watching a movie about dancers one night. floria Sunshine, thank you, oh please send the photo, were you a dancer? floria Seymour, you even rhyme in your replies. LOL>..thanks. Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Accordionmaid, thank you so much. I appreciate your reply, floria Lyra, I knew it, I knew I would come back and see a dancer. HAHAHAHA I was counting on you..But wait. that guy looks like he is killing her LOLOL..thank you so much for your support. floria Maureen that is toooooooo funny,, hahah moonbeam and poison ivy. Wow..thanks, floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! (whistles and throws up roses on the stage as the curtain call is made and you bow) This is wonderful, sweet friend, what a funny coincidence because next Thursday I'm going to be at a Shakespeare festival to perform Leonato in "Much Ado About Nothing" and I'm going to break a leg, whatever that means! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Floria I feel that it must be a thrill...the music, the build up of anticipation, the fear, the exhaultation. I would love to have been a dancer...I expect it is a bit like writing poetry, but in motion. Lovely poem! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Floria...Gorgeous poem!!!! Loved the rhythm and expression in this wonderful poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Floria - most beautiful write, I could see the dancers as I read this... BC |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Floria~ This actually made me close my eyes and see too lovers, dancers daning....very lovely!! HUGSSSS Lauren~ Step through the |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
floria, Now I really wish I knew how to dance! Awesome right. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Floria, I love music, the stage, performing.. this brought back a lot of memories. Nicely done! ~Hugs~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is good...James |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thanks you Noah for your kind thoughts, hope your play turns out great. floria Martie,thank you, it must be an exciting way of life, floria Ivy Rose, thank you so much for your comments. floria Bill, so glad you "felt" this poem, floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Lauren thanks I am glad you enjoyed it. floria Larry, hmmm, just one foot following another, LOL, thanks floria Enchantress, I would imagine this would bring back memories for you. thank you, floria James, thank you for your reply, floria Floria |
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