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Kit McCallum
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0 posted 2002-04-03 07:43 AM




I Am Here For You

When life is less than kind,
And you are struggling through the day,
Remember, I am here for you
To help you find your way.

When burdens overwhelm,
And you are ready to implode,
Remember, I am here for you
To lighten up your load.

When you are feeling down,
And need a shoulder or an ear,
Remember, I am here for you
To take away your fear.

When obstacles are in your way,
And barricades prevail,
Remember, I am here for you
To help you walk this trail.

When doubts are closing in on you,
And nothing's as it seems,
Remember, I am here for you
To help you find your dreams.

When you cannot think clearly,
And you need a point of view,
Remember, I am here for you
To always see you through.

Whenever I can help you,
Just remember this, my friend,
You're not alone … I'm here for you …
On that, you can depend.

/Kit McCallum


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[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (04-03-2002 10:03 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kit McCallum - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-03 08:05 AM


You're like the ultimate sweety Kit...yes you are...

btw - I got your email, and I love it...finding something suitable to send back...

big hugs...have a nice day today

K


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2 posted 2002-04-03 08:05 AM




(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I cried reading this feeling how lucky I am to have such a wonderful caring friend like you as I know everyone else loves you too, you always have so much love to share and when you are feeling down, you bet we'll all be here for you too always! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you always delight our days, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kit, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-03 08:36 AM



Isn't this what it is all about - being around just to lend a helping hand...and to find that when we least expect it, to be given back that hand many times over...

well done, our Kit...

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4 posted 2002-04-03 08:37 AM


Kit my dearest friend this is awesome, truly exceptional writing. The words alone would have made this arresting reading, when it’s combined with your amazing skill of form it’s utterly utterly perfect. YOU know I adore your writing, simply adore it, you have the skill to write in a whole range of styles across the board.

You do know I really LOVE this don’t you? I thought you would pick up the subtle and delicate nuances of my rapture. That too is one of the reasons I adore you, you always know when to laugh This is sooooooooo typically you, the loving and always inspiring gift that is Kit personified

Fabulous writing darling heart utterly utterly fabulous
  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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5 posted 2002-04-03 08:40 AM


Kit~

This is a soft expression of words, placed perfectly upon all the hearts that read....thank you...


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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6 posted 2002-04-03 08:51 AM


Kit~

'Whenever I can help you,
Just remember this, my friend,
You're not alone … I'm here for you …
On that, you can depend.'


Well ... I just love it !
Of course I'll bet you didn't expect to be called on so quickly ... but ... do you do TAXES ?
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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7 posted 2002-04-03 08:53 AM


Oh Kit, this is so beautiful! I was just thinking about writing some like this. But, I could never write it as good as you do.
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8 posted 2002-04-03 08:55 AM


This is wonderful - it would make a  GREAT Passions Greeting card on the main site too. You should talk to Ron about that!!
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9 posted 2002-04-03 09:57 AM


Kit,
PdV is right. What wonderful encouragment and support coming from a true and gentle heart. I'll keep that offer in mind. Eventually, I'm sure I'll need it.

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10 posted 2002-04-03 10:01 AM


Quite rhythmatic and excellently rhymed ~ the subject matter reminded me of the songs Lean on Me and He Aint Heavy ~ a pleasure to read.
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11 posted 2002-04-03 10:02 AM


That IS friendship

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12 posted 2002-04-03 10:17 AM


enjoy your read
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13 posted 2002-04-03 01:38 PM


Very Lovely Kit..Enjoyed your warm caring words..hugs

              ~Victoria


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



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14 posted 2002-04-03 02:13 PM


awww Kit, what a good friend you are!
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15 posted 2002-04-03 03:26 PM


Everyone needs a friend like you Kit, that was lovely. We are here for you too dear. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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16 posted 2002-04-03 03:42 PM


Lovely, Kit. Sentiments appreciated by many, I'm sure.
And same to you.
Sandra

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17 posted 2002-04-04 12:40 PM


Oh thanks, make me cry, why don't you? *sigh* I was wondering if I could take you up on that sometime soon...

Beautiful write, Kit. Beautiful write.

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18 posted 2002-04-04 12:58 PM


Once I start reading one of your poems, I just can't stop.  Like floating down a river.
Thanks, Kit.

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19 posted 2002-04-04 01:12 AM


Everyone needs a friend just like this, Kit.  So very well expressed.  

Michael

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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20 posted 2002-04-04 09:24 AM


oh my....you made me cry, thanks for sharing your beautiful heart...
to have a friend like you must be wonderful!

((hugs))
Charisma

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21 posted 2002-04-04 09:38 AM


Kit, this is beautiful, you have captured the side of friendship we all wish for, the friend that will be there to listen not to preach the friend that will sit there in silence and comfort with the sound of their breath. Beautiful and really well written, God Bless you and your friends that are so lucky to have you there by their sides.
          Clare

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22 posted 2002-04-04 01:59 PM


What a beautiful promise... never-ending love and support. *S* Methinks that even your wonderful poetry can't compare with the loveliness of your heart or the value of your caring. *S*

rofg @ Marge's taxes... whatever did you get yourself into, Kit? *G*

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23 posted 2002-04-04 09:29 PM


You always have been and that is one thing that is so special about you.  Now that you put it into poetic form ... I don't think that anyone could question it.  Boy oh boy is it ever nice to be able to get in here and find you still adding the comfort of the place.  
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24 posted 2002-04-04 11:11 PM


Kit, you are all of that and so much more....anyone would be blessed to be your friend
Kit McCallum
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25 posted 2002-04-05 06:58 AM


Thank you so much everyone for all of the lovely replies. I'm sorry that I can't thank everyone individually this time, but I'm pretty swamped trying to get enough work done at the office that I can go on vacation up to visit Nan ... it's only a week away, and I've got "miles to go before I sleep", lol.

Big hugs to you all, for being the wonderful poetic friends that you are,
Much appreciation to all,
/Kit

(PS ... Mark ... it's so WONDERFUL to see you here!)

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26 posted 2002-04-05 10:05 AM


and i think i will borrow this for an e-card, actually.....
-Dave

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27 posted 2002-04-05 10:16 AM


you truly are the heart of this place.
your love and support is appreciated by
so many and God blessed anyone who is
your friend! lovely sentiments from the
heart. as always just beautiful!

take care.
amy

ps im honored to call you friend.

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

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28 posted 2002-04-05 08:35 PM


Beautifully written. If only all people were as kind and caring as you. Thanks for sharing.

"What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been."

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29 posted 2002-04-05 10:35 PM


A beautiful poem, Kit...and some wonderful sentiments for a lucky friend.
~friendly hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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30 posted 2002-04-06 04:35 PM


Being able to be there for someone is the best part of friendship.

~sky

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31 posted 2002-04-06 09:08 PM


Kit - I can sure use these words right now..

BC

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32 posted 2002-04-07 06:29 AM


Excellent

Melton

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