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Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-04-06 12:23 PM

Late of evening
in the summer-set of years,
he of cerulean eyes
lured she of doe-spun brown
to fertile mating grounds
windswept of passion's fire.

Yet, when night overshadowed
daylight's destiny,
when two in a thousand met,
when fate had shaken their hands
leaving its palm-print
upon their hearts; then as
two moths capering
in bulb-lit spheres,
two lovers' wing tips brushed
and for one minuscule
fragment of time
were joined together
in an intimate coupling
of ecstacy and rhyme.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2002-04-06 12:26 PM

all it takes is that one moment..liked how you got there

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-04-06 12:27 PM

I am keeping this

it's perfect

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-04-06 12:29 PM

two moths capering
in bulb-lit spheres,
two lovers' wing tips brushed
and for one minuscule
fragment of time
were joined together
in an intimate coupling
of ecstacy and rhyme.

Like fireflys dance in the heat of the night.
Ivy Rose, I love how you make your words flutter. This was so good!!!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2002-04-06 12:33 PM

Ivy Rose,
What a wonderful lilting poem. Extremely well done.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-04-06 09:31 AM

Whoa,,, wow, you are writing so good Ivy.. Love this one. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-04-06 12:15 PM

Yet, when night overshadowed
daylight's destiny,
when two in a thousand met,
when fate had shaken their hands
leaving its palm-print
upon their hearts; then as

Loved your words Ivy..

hugs

~Victoria

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-04-06 01:13 PM

(smiles) Wow, I remeber this poem with all my heart, this is by far one of my favorites of yours, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) May you always rise on your heels and dance off the tips of your toe shoes with your love forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-04-06 01:34 PM

Ivy Rose

The thought and the way you wrote it...just lovely!!

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